Mangadonf

Mangadonf

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Mangadonf
Mangadonf
15 days ago
Commented

It's nice to have a POV to understand what they think. But at this point your story is more about the game itself than the protagonist making game. I think you should limit the POVs to the game highlight.

How would you like to see future reaction chapters featuring Ruby playing Arkham Asylum? I came across someone who complained that having ten consecutive chapters of Ruby playing Arkham Asylum was excessive, which I can understand. I want to write the characters' reactions to various scenes, but since I'm limiting myself to 1,000 words per chapter, it often results in multiple updates that just show their point of view while playing, rather than focusing on the main character.

Becoming the Strongest as a Game Dev

Becoming the Strongest as a Game Dev

Video Games · Najicablitz626

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
3 months ago
Commented

Isn't it normal to be subdued when surrounded by people than can squash you like a bug ? What do you mean he as a timid demeanor... Like, do you expect him to strut like a peacock ?

"Why is Xiao Yan here?" Among the crowd, an old man in black also noticed Xiao Yan. This man was Ling Ying, Xun'er's bodyguard who had once protected her in the north-western region. Seeing Xiao Yan's current level of strength and his timid demeanor, Ling Ying couldn't help but shake his head. "The young lady's future accomplishments are like the moon compared to the stars when next to him. I hope he understands this..."

BTTH: I married Xun'er, but she refuses to consummate our marriage!

BTTH: I married Xun'er, but she refuses to consummate our marriage!

Anime & Comics · Bloodrunk

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
7 months ago
Commented

if you make a harem make it a one woman per world max please.

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
8 months ago
Commented

Super thanks for the chapters. Hope to see you soon.

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
1 years ago
Commented

It’s your story. Do what make you feel happy writing. Youcan’t please everyone.

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
1 years ago
Commented

Dude... Do you even know the meaning of the word ’friend’ ? Are you mistaking it with the word ’stranger’ ?

"It is time to meet up with them. Even though they never invited me, I can still count as their friend right?" thought Nie Long.

Heavenly God Technique in Douluo Dalu

Heavenly God Technique in Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · HeavenlySpaceDrago

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
1 years ago
Commented

People will always read and like good stuff. Get used to it ;)

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
1 years ago
Commented

Since when Tang San was looking down on him ? As far as I know they didn't interact aside from the first day at school where MC ignored him XD Did I miss like... 10 chapters or something ?

Tang San who saw this was shocked because he thought that he is the most talented since he have the Clear Sky Hammer, the strongest Tool-type Martial Spirit. But Nie Long, someone who he looks down upon becomes the sun in the noon.

Heavenly God Technique in Douluo Dalu

Heavenly God Technique in Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · HeavenlySpaceDrago

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
2 years ago
Commented

The harem tag is literally in the story description. I don't know what to tell you.

But nothing could stop reporter and photograph Luna Lovegood and her loyal sidekick Ginny Weasley. I also want to know if they are worthy of becoming my brother's 'harem'. I am not sure exactly what that is, but brother told me it was something 'cool' only the best wizard could have, and it needed pretty witches.

Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter

Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Mangadonf

Mangadonf
Mangadonf
2 years ago
Replied to I_dont_believe_it

no idea. Don’t want to right now.

  • Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter original

    Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter

    Book&Literature REINCARNATION MAGIC HAREM VILLAIN HARRYPOTTER

    4.66

    the MC will reincarnate in a Harry potter world. With the help of his extreme talent in mind magic, follow Aelius Lovegood as he tries to make the best of this new life.

    11 Chs 2.6k 收藏

  • Godly crafter in DxD original

    Godly crafter in DxD

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION COMEDY HAREM OVERPOWERED ISEKAI DEVIL

    4.3

    MC gets reborn as Rias Gremory twin brother, Alexander. Alas, he's considered a reject since he doesn't possess the Bael power of destruction. Instead, he gained a different kind of power, an incredible insight for crafting ! Slightly AU. ------------ At best the MC will have 2-3 womans with whom he'll have an intimate relationship ------------ Disclaimer : I of course do not owe the right of High School DxD or any character belonging to the franchise. They belong to ichiei Ishibumi, Miyama Zero, Fujimi Shobo and TNK. I do not owe the cover picture either, I found it on Pinterest. If the owner wants me to take it down, just ask me.

    55 Chs 14.2k 收藏