Another thing, there’s quite a bit of terms and names being thrown about that just fly over the head of someone who’s only seen the show and not read the books. A little bit of well used context here and there would be nice.
I’m going to hold off a little longer for reviewing. the age issue is very off putting. Also it’s odd how blood thirsty he is. His personality is very bent.
The ages in this story are absurd. if all the younger characters gained at least 5 years then it might make sense.
At that time another, young dark hair, dark brown eyed young teen walked up, he had come with the procession. He was wearing a green surcoat with the sigil of House Hightower. Gerold Hightower who I had learned was squiring for Prince Duncan. Gerold was a year older than myself and close to 5'10" around 150lbs as oppose to my 5'7", 125lbs.
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Why the hll is every character a minor?
Yes there is aheavy amount of updates
Oh just let lanie kill him already
While the premis is interesting, the character development is completely inconsistent. One minute hes thinking clear the next its chaos. And every time you think he’s free, nope! Just throw out all the character development and start over.
Way lame, im out. Mad i wasted my time reading to here.
Its completely arbitrary.
At that time another, young dark hair, dark brown eyed young teen walked up, he had come with the procession. He was wearing a green surcoat with the sigil of House Hightower. Gerold Hightower who I had learned was squiring for Prince Duncan. Gerold was a year older than myself and close to 5'10" around 150lbs as oppose to my 5'7", 125lbs.
The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024