kraken05

male LV 14

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徽章 9

Moments 7
kraken05
kraken05
2 years ago
Commented

Because he wasn't rough enough before (:

kraken05
kraken05
3 years ago
Replied to Drk

Awesome book, but the wait is killing me

FictionOnlyReader - Author - Please recommend published novels that you think are beautifully written, as in the style of writing — wordsmithing. I'm trying to improve my writing style.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

kraken05
kraken05
3 years ago
Commented

still possible that the Abate were responsible for the hit tho

Aksel Thorn - Bodyguard - In the initial drafts, he had assassinated Quinn's parents on a hit paid by Brio Abate.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

kraken05
kraken05
3 years ago
Commented

perhaps "his" fake wand? otherwise I'd think she can do wandless magic too.

He nodded and walked near her. Taking out her fake wand, Quinn performed magic to fix her hair, turning her hair back to normal.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

kraken05
kraken05
3 years ago
Commented

He'll be the one surprised

"It's a surprise," grinned James but didn't reply.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

kraken05
kraken05
3 years ago
Commented

Or what would happen when any of the other members of his team die (plot forbids) ?

If he took Mirabelle back as a full team member, and even injected a portion of his soul into her, what would happen when she died?

The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

Games · NightWind

kraken05
kraken05
4 years ago
Commented

Ha, this reminded me of Mother of Learning.

When Jake reopened his eyes, his body was still soaked by the sea water and the corpse of a pterodactyl vulture was gently levitating behind him. A roar between that of an elephant, a tiger and a whale resounded and a moment later, a hungry T-Rex with multicolored feathers appeared before his eyes.

The Oracle Paths

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize