I am happy to hear a positive response. As for a glossary, that can be done. I already have one for personal use, but it will have to be trimmed down a decent amount for reader usage. Already working on this.
No harem, but there will be a love interest.
Like many of my predecessors, I am also leaving a review of my own novel. However, this isn't a promotion. More of a... heads-up, perhaps? Either way, I felt the need to provide a bit more information to any readers scrolling through the review section. First of all, the world-building is a bit sparse as of ch 26. That should change after the introduction is over and the group is back home (A slight spoiler, though I doubt anyone didn't see it coming.) This is also my first novel, so I apologize in advance if any portions feel choppy or of lower quality. Feel free to leave a comment concerning it. I have a lot of ideas for this novel, but the delivery may fall short at times. Especially during fight scenes. It is an unfortunate reality, though one I strive to overcome with time and practice. That said, I would appreciate it if you give me and my writing a chance. I have a long ways to go as an author, but I still hope that my work has enough merit to be viewed as an enjoyable read. Sincerely, Dontlookdown
The description is well done, and the characters have their own voice. The plot is pretty solid too. The one thing that I would like a bit more of is world building and a bit more description, which I believe the author is skilled enough to pull of. Overall, I would recommend this book.
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Gotta love a good homicidal love triangle. I think the writing quality is good, just has the odd sentence or two. I would love to learn a bit more about the world the novel is set up in, even if it focuses on a royal handmaiden and her suitors. The introduction of the witch also brings magic into the mix, and I look forward to how that affects the story. I can see great potential, and I hope that the author can take this story to the next level.
I enjoyed the main character and the choice of becoming a druid. Mixing a high-tech world with an RPG fantasy is a great concept, which I believe to be this novel's strong point. I would like it if more of the game's background was expanded upon. I think it would benefit from a bit more exposition.
The premise is great. I have a soft spot for OP kingdom stories thanks to overlord. The writing quality is a slight issue with the first few chapters, but I could see it improving as I read farther in. As for the characters, I found Rico to be my favorite. Pacing was a problem, but again, improves as the story goes further along. I think with some editing-- mixed with the gradual improvement of the writing quality --this can go from a good novel to a great one.
A lot of thought and work was clearly put into creating the background of the gods and their actions, which is awesome. The characters are well-written, and the progression of the MC is nice. There are some moments where the pacing felt a little fast, or the dialogue was a bit clunky, but it was a good read overall.
It is not a bad story. I think the main issue is that there are some grammar mistakes, but the novel is far from poorly written. It fits the webnovel criteria, and I wish the author success on their journey.
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original Hero of Greed
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The Vecora Continent is home to three countries of great power, each with its own grudges, desires, and internal machinations. Athios. An alliance of belligerent city-states that make up the southern region, whose borders are being encroached on by hungry neighbors. Theurgard. A clannish collective located in the freezing northern steppes of Vecora. With the passing of time, it has evolved into a hawkish empire, whose frostbitten populace hungrily stares toward the more temperate south. Finally, Rochan. A kingdom made up of traders, merchants, seafarers, and ambitious adventurers. They call the Delane Peninsula their home, sandwiched between Athios and Theugard. Rochan has found itself benefiting off the other two's skirmishes, though such gold has created dangerously ambitious nobles. And living on this continent, is Gary. Neither his name nor personality would suggest Gary would ever have an impact on the world. Generally unpleasant and of average talent, he would have been lucky to be put down as a footnote in history. He is a greedy, lying, sorry excuse of a team leader who is more than willing to risk it all for some gold. But stuck in a dire situation, Gary experiences a freak accident, one that leads him either to the end of the world, or a chance at greatness. Living in a world with scheming nobles and existential doom, Gary must change his actions, and become something he was never meant to be: a hero. Or... at least pretend to be one. ................ AN: I do not own the cover53 Chs 116 收藏
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Webnovel writing guide (for dummies!)
Are you trying to write a novel, but you just aren't sure that you are capable of making a successful story? You're in luck! Anyone is capable of writing a story people will vote for, no matter how dumb you may be; just look at the power stone rankings! By following my detailed guide, I guarantee you that those sweet readers will flock to you! From cultivation novels to whatever the last category I choose to write about, this guide leaves no base uncovered. Now just sit back potential fanfic writers and read my book, because soon you will learn how to prey on the less intellectually gifted through the use of foolproof cliches and feel good self-insertion! Enjoy! AN: Currently on Hiatus due to writer's block. In the meantime, please check out my novel 'Hero of Greed.'7 Chs 84 收藏
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Fantasy · Dontlookdown