The story was engaging with all language and description that wasn't too 'filler' or exaggerated. I love that the women character wasn't described weirdly like monsters, compared to other author. The plot also clear and fighting scene was amazing. Like other author, always cut the fighting scene in between with unnecessary description of all detailed explanation which sometimes irks me. Plus, his character was sometimes too naive and sometimes too ruthless. He only learn disguise after twice almost died. Despite all assassination, he keep being careless and all the time was stalked and killed. His ability totally get useless after few fight/usage. And i also get bit annoyed when mc decided to find his prospective dao partner whom been missing for years during critical junction where he gonna upgrade to Golden Core. He already aware of all those many assassins and bad people targeting to kill him but still carelessly going out for plot purpose. Also he noticed that the tribulation definitely happen during these time, the probability was high and definitely not right timing to start dao partner thingy. It's bit stupid. Overall, it's good read but could be more perfect. I like it.
"For example, a cultivator who had just succeeded in Core Formation was killed by fellow disciples or their Daoist partner, which also belonged to the personal disaster." And somehow our mc was looking for Yan Ru, his prospective Dao Partner right at this critical moment. The MC definitely has something wrong in his brain.🙄
He was right. Talking too much are annoying to readers too.[img=recommend]
Actually all that happens doesn't concern our protagonist. He could just leave the town to next destination. Why would a sane person involve themselves in trouble which confirmed fatal just for curiosity? He doesn't even strong enough yet. It doesn't make sense.[img=Speechless]
Teleports?
I feel shy knowing author really read our netizen comments 🫣 Thanks author for not over describing women features in all the chapters. I feel so happy/content reading the chapters. I'll strive to increase popularity vote for your creation every day ❤️
We all think so too 😂
Not again??? This is generic troupe in cultivation novel, brat! 😂 It was annoying reading a person so naive in cultivation world. Is he some kind of young master then it was acceptable lol. He doesn't even bargain with anyone, wasn't even more careful after first robbery attempt. Once is coincidence, twice is stupidity.
I think the story described so well just the jump between scene bit everywhere. The story has big potential 👍 Thanks Author
He doesn't sell pills instead he stopped making pills since Qi level 6 😂. He sell his trophies from all those enemies killed by him. Every time he got poor he magically open new bags and sold new magic items from his enemies of long chapters before. Till chp 250+ he doesn't create pills or talisman nor arrays by himself. He bought em or got it from his dead cannon fodder.
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