No but I'm very open to a widening of it with you adding other creature that may not be mentionned in the original
2. Have another franchise in the novel, and if so, what would you choose? (Y/N/Comment)
Movies · DumbedDown
Always like longer, but it's ok since your release rate is good
5. Are the chapter sizes to your liking? (Y/N)
Movies · DumbedDown
yes
4. Is the pace enjoyable for you? (Y/N)
Movies · DumbedDown
I'm gonna be honest with you, your story is good, but one of the thing that made you keep the public in was your insane release rate of 3 to 4 chapter a day. It made it insanely easy to keep us engaged as we thought of it for a while everyday. Be prepared to loose a lot of people if you reduce the release rate to 1-2 chapter a week, cause you just changed the strongest argument you had to create a following for your story into a weak point. Not saying you should keep up the insane rate but now you are downright slow. About the patreøn can you tell us more? Is it only early reading or is there a faster release rate?
I did think it was a hint, but I just thought that it meant he would reach third realm in the end. Not that he was an Ultimate existence
Throughout the novel, the transformation from a low-dimensional lifeform to an Ultimate existence proved to be an arduous feat to truly portray. Hence, my intention was to unveil the protagonist's true identity in the final moments. In fact, I had sprinkled numerous hints throughout the earlier stages. I wonder if it caught everyone by surprise.
Sci-fi · I Eat Tomatoes
The man that was so scary he got his pacifist village nuked
//// Probably Master Yi. ////
Video Games · TypicalFicEnjoyer6
As long as it's not dropped by either you or the original author it's fine
I'm not, but my original post was just asking to respect the fact that it doesn't follow modern notion and not try to use precise terminology like lightspeed because then you are trying to apply term that have a defined sense to them on action that doesn't match them and as I was saying, for my part at least it break immersion. It was just me trying to ask the author to not use the term again as it didn't fit the action in the novel and so it would just either seem cool to people ignorant of what real lightspeed imply or stupid for those understanding it. Also what you said earlier was partly untrue, while their power indeed don't fit common sense, and chakra is a mystical energy that doesn't exist in our reality as far as we know, they do mostly follow basic physic principle with things like water countering fire and earth isolating lightning, or those miniplanet being created through gravity control and while it may not seem obvious but lightspeed is such a basic physical principle, it is literally referring to the speed of light, and this speed is so fast that any being with a mass superior to null would cause disaster for the earth if going at such a speed. So yes, I'm not trying to apply common sense, but this isn't common sense, it's a precise term referring to a precise mesure of a precise velocity, and using it without knowing it's implication is just saying nonsense that break the immersion of someone that pay attention to such thing. Anyway the original comment was just me trying to get the author to not use it.
During this phase, Jiryoku's speed had escalated to nearly that of light. Itachi, who materialized behind Jiryoku, was swiftly cleaved in half. However, it became evident that this Itachi was a mere shadow clone.
Anime & Comics · Hkj
Is that your thinking, let's talk straight fact since you want to go casualise it even more. At lightspeed, he would reach his enemy who is a 100m away in less than a 1/100 of a second, would go through his body even if said body was as resilient than a planet then with is vision impaired would crash into trees, building and other person until the curvature of the planet make him meet the ground has he is flying straight(or more likely would just leave the orbit and die from the environnement in spave). That impact would then cause a nuclear explosion more powerful than anything we can create creating an event similar to the meteor that ended the good old dinosaur and that same impact would also push the planet off orbit that would thus change season and probably cause the destruction of said planet. And all of that in less than a second. But even before that his speed would cause such heat through friction that he would disintegrate himself but not before said heat destroyed the whole atmosphere condamning all living being on said planet to death. Anyway, if you don't understand a concept, stick to simple world like fast, with adjective like extremly or insanely or at worst use the speed of sound it would already be faster than anything in the anime apart from teleportation. But I'm ranting more for myself than anything else anyway
During this phase, Jiryoku's speed had escalated to nearly that of light. Itachi, who materialized behind Jiryoku, was swiftly cleaved in half. However, it became evident that this Itachi was a mere shadow clone.
Anime & Comics · Hkj
A lovely story, pray tell?
Old Valyria: House Baelaeron
TV · Jasonenrick