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Our MC spencer had an unexpected death by the hands of two men and was transported to a world filled with powerhouses capable of destroying worlds. wielding powers bestowed by a god, follow Spencer in his journey to the zenith.
this is my first novel, I would like to give it a try and see how it goes, please give constructive criticism.
to those that are telling other people to not read the novel for themselves because of a stupid reason or some randomness, or any reason in general, and without even taking into account that they are one person and people might like what they don't is disgusting and incompetent.}}
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Trust me you won't be disappointed!!!! The author is on another league and he/she really knows their stuff. Personally I'm really enjoying this fan-fic and from what I've read there 99% (damn one 1% escaped) you will too.
I deleted my old review and put this one to get something straight. For a while now I have been getting butthurt people talking about the one rape scene that appeared in the novel that went on for roughly four lines and wasn't even in detail. If another person starts to complain about that ****, I'm straight up deleting your comment or review immediately, I'm tired of it and I can't tolerate responding to toddlers on a constant basis, who just can't seem to handle something like that, but is fine when the main character commits mass murder right?. And to those that are telling other people to not read the novel for themselves because of a stupid reason or some randomness, or any reason in general, and without even taking into account that they are one person and people might like what they don't is disgusting and incompetent.
Phenomenal writing all around, from the grammar to the development. The only real downside to this story is the update speed, but it’s not like they’re getting paid to write it so who cares. Just appreciate that this person is bothering to write such an amazing story in the first place. Honestly though great job author can’t wait for more.
The novels good, the whole concept of being transported to the Jurassic era of DC is new to me and it feels refreshing, it's slow paced at the beginning with not much time passing for the Mc in this jurastic arc, need to see how he acts once meeting intelligent life..presumably humans or the greek god I HOPE he meets. I might be biased in my review as im not taking into account anything besides the things i like but who cares, just read and judge for yourself.
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Honestly I agree it's too nerfed and the Martians aren't that op and also you should of stuck to hibernation and woke him up in the ancient Greece to make an impact on history so the league and the amazon's would find out about him in mythology fucking the gods lives and bringing terror beyond cronos,also I think you should right a fan fic about xenoblade chronicles 2 I really like mythra she's a tsundere you could make mc rex's older brother of 18 and got mythra while he got pyra,mythra is stronger though and don't nerf him just being with mythra is enough for the story.nerfing ruins a good story.
A Very Good Story, I just didn't like it when it allowed others to get some Meteor powers ... but it's good, at least they will spread their legacy to the world ... Overall a Story Very good. ⣾⣿⠿⠿⠶⠿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣤⣄⢀⡅⢠⣾⣛⡉⠄⠄⠄⠸⢀⣿. ⢀⡋⣡⣴⣶⣶⡀⠄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣴⣿⣿⣿⢃⣤⣄⣀⣥⣿⣿ ⢸⣇⠻⣿⣿⣿⣧⣀⢀⣠⡌⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⣿⣿⣿ ⢸⣿⣷⣤⣤⣤⣬⣙⣛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣿⣿⡍⠄⠄⢀⣤⣄⠉⠋ ⣖⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢇⣿⣿⡷⠶⠶⢿⣿⣿⠇⢀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣽⣿⣿⣿⡇⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣥⣴⣿ ⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟ ⣦⣌⣛⣻⣿⣿⣧⠙⠛⠛⡭⠅⠒⠦⠭⣭⡻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠃ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠹⠈⢋⣽⣿⣿⣿⣿⣵⣾⠃ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⣴⣿⣶⣄⠄⣴⣶⠄⢀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⠄ ⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⢻⣿⣿⣿⠄⣿⣿⡀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣛⠛⠁⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠈⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⠁⠞⢿⣿⣿⡄⢿⣿⡇⣸⣿⣿⠿⠛⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠉⠻⣿⣿⣾⣦⡙⠻⣷⣾⣿⠃⠿⠋⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⣠ ⣿⣶⣶⣮⣥⣒⠲⢮⣝⡿⣿⣿⡆⣿⡿⠃⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄. ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⠛⢉⢉⠉⠉⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⠠⡰⣕⣗⣷⣧⣀⣅⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⣠⣳⣟⣿⣿⣷⣿⡿⣜⠄⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠁⠄⣳⢷⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣝⠖⠄⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⠄⢢⡹⣿⢷⣯⢿⢷⡫⣗⠍⢰⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡏⢀⢄⠤⣁⠋⠿⣗⣟⡯⡏⢎⠁⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⠄⢔⢕⣯⣿⣿⡲⡤⡄⡤⠄⡀⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠇⠠⡳⣯⣿⣿⣾⢵⣫⢎⢎⠆⢀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⢨⣫⣿⣿⡿⣿⣻⢎⡗⡕⡅⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⢜⢾⣾⣿⣿⣟⣗⢯⡪⡳⡀⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⢸⢽⣿⣷⣿⣻⡮⡧⡳⡱⡁⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡄⢨⣻⣽⣿⣟⣿⣞⣗⡽⡸⡐⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡇⢀⢗⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣞⡵⡣⣊⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡀⡣⣗⣿⣿⣿⣿⣯⡯⡺⣼⠎⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣧⠐⡵⣻⣟⣯⣿⣷⣟⣝⢞⡿⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⢘⡺⣽⢿⣻⣿⣗⡷⣹⢩⢃⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⠄⠪⣯⣟⣿⢯⣿⣻⣜⢎⢆⠜⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠄⢣⣻⣽⣿⣿⣟⣾⡮⡺⡸⠸⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡿⠛⠉⠁⠄⢕⡳⣽⡾⣿⢽⣯⡿⣮⢚⣅⠹⣿⣿⣿ ⡿⠋⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⠒⠝⣞⢿⡿⣿⣽⢿⡽⣧⣳⡅⠌⠻⣿ ⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠐⡐⠱⡱⣻⡻⣝⣮⣟
Love this fan fix hopefully you finish it it has a perfect storyline and the oc character you created is awesome this is one of my favorite now after reading it
It's a good story to kill time, the MC is a little annoying and stupid at times- but it's related to his constant evolution- and he's like a Saiyan if a Saiyan was immortal and could regenerate- mixed with the Manga Series Re:Monster he gains traits from those he eats.
Good story, character development is decent but if he's only goal is to get stronger are more famous it will start to get boring, would be good to think about it. i mean at the point where the actual line of DC starts he will be (most likely) an apex being so everything would become blank and bland, i suppose a romance part or something else that could make the story progress in more than just one way would be great. Thanks for the hard work by the way
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Okay so rly liked the idea of the story and is smilier to something I read before. Loved the initial chapters however when it got to the tribe then kingdom I found it all boring and useless. This to me took a massive turn And has turned me off as I liked the lone hunting style being peak of the planet. I mean whats the point of making a kingdom when your at the peak ? Not to mention he constantly complained about being bored but then spent 20+ years in the same place sitting in a mansion... Finally what made me drop mainly is the power he got from the meteor. For me the mc was like the strongest creature. Like kido from one piece, was looking forward to the future of the badass and how wonder woman etc would react to him and his history. Loved that he was solely physical with his main thing being evolution. But then you go and give him a tooth fairy power where he can do anything he imagines... Like what is the point of his being if he can do anything.. What I was hoping was the stone or whatever just gave him massive resistance to magic, god powers etc Then we can keep his badass self of strongest creature. A tank that can withstand anything, destroy anything. Plus you never see an mc that just evolves on a physical base without all these extra add ons, like mind reading, fire magic etc.. If you can ignore all the things I mentioned above or even like them then it is a good read, just not for me. Gl to author
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The general story is just great. The author doesn't rush and the plot line is just smooth. The MC isn't one of those dumb ones and he thinks through most of his actions. Kudos author. Not fun having it gone though.
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This story doesent really deserve a 5 star in All catagories, but ur imagination and genuine ideas r simply put, awesome. Ive been wanting to read something like this story for a long while now, and this doesent dissapoint. The frst thing is that this took place in DC, second was the point in time. Third was ur creativity and added to that the phenomenol character development, albiet not steady, makes it an exellent piece of work. But by far the best thing about this fic was the powers, ADAPTATION/EVOLUTION/ASSIMILATION is my absolute favourite set of power, coupled with dinosaurs, now ur just spoiling us. All in all, great story. Dont get discouraged by hate comments, theyll always be some no matter what, keep updating, take a break, rest but dont let this go, its a unique concept meant to be held on to. Ps: R his powers and appearence a nod towards Doomsday? They match alot, also thatd be a curious meeting between the 2, dont u think?😊
Great Story especially characters development, and the way you explore the Ancient Era of DC instead of big time skip is awesome and you did it very well, also the writing quality is good for me, and thank you for this good novel, also i hope you wouldn't drop this
its a great work. its starts off rough but picks quality with progression. its like seeing a rough stone carved, sculptured into a gem, then a finally a diamond. and all this before canon. i am excited for more and when canon starts. thank you.
Well I'm late with my review things to do in their life so no complaints there. The story development huh 🤔, to me the story is developing pretty well it's not too fast and not too fast and not too slow, you know the characters are all pretty different to some degree I also like Spencer's now Alexander's development as a person he goes from a regular human to a being that thinks like a beast to who we have now. This is in the DC universe yes, but it doesn't immediately start where all the superheroes and supervillains are running around. The rape scene, the rape scene tsk, tsk, tsk. What are you guys fucking babies at the time in which he raped that woman it was as common as fucking trees, so why are you getting such a big head about it and for starters there is only one rape scene and there will be only one as clearly seen by Spencer's now Alexander's character development, also there are many novels and Fan Fictions with much more rape like seriously. Anyway if you give this Fan-fic a chance I promise you won't regret it 👍
It is a really good Story and the Author doesn't rush anything so that our MC would be Invincible but instead he makes steady progress . And to calm down everbody .....nooo he isn't some Beta ....scared ....useless MC...NOOO FAR FROM IT !. He is THE MC ...and this is ...THE NOVEL!!!!