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Did not read it. I saw a review where that reviewer too didn't read the novel but gave a bad review. Gave this review to counter that. And to tell Author that his idea for this novel is not bad for all readers. 'Card game in One piece' is a unique idea in my opinion and is worth to give this try. I will write another review after reading this novel.
I have two complaints after reading this for a bit: 1°: Insta loyalty: The MC didn't earn his monsters loyalty, they just follow his lead for no reason, the way it is right now it feels like unearned power, all he has to be is a little lucky in his shop drawings and he becomes a top dog in the world, like I said, unearned. 2°: No theme: It would be cooler if the MC could ONLY get cards from an especific themed deck he choosed beforehand, for example an all dark spellcaster deck or a warrior deck, the way you are doing it feels all over the place and anything could come out of that shop, that means you will never have to work around a weakness because you have all the answers a shop draw distance away. Other than that great idea and story so far. ☺
There's not much to give review as i already made it in comment section. Mostly i disliked about this novel is story development. It's feels like i'm reading a new story with only devil fruit from one piece & Yu-Gi-Oh system from Yu-Gi-Oh.
Not going to read any futher… a card game in OP ? yhea… no, maybe something else, but not an card game. ........................................
Starts of good. Then get shot. Does not focus on the mc. Just random **** that has no plot. . . . The authors had a good idea then he ruined it.
Pretty good work with the story development and character progression. The updates are reasonable (at least 1 a day on average). Although there is so many One Piece fanfic, this one stands out from the others.
Writing Quality: Good, readable Stability of Updates: For now still good, many chapters a day Story Development: Not sure what to say... Neutral? Character Design: Kinda lacking I say, barely know any character except MC, many OC that also need to be developed if they kinda going to join MC World Background: Ehm... you should at least read or watch One Piece to know the world
Wow the more i read this fanfic the more i feel that you are the original of this one piece. .. .seriously who would thought that there is devil root .. .. All the ancient family are new to me cuz i stop watch OP after ep907... Hope you keep updated the book
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Bro please update more chapters per day. This story is so awesome that i have to wait for your chapter to arrive. Your story has everything in it that like..while a combi of yu gi oh and one piece is ackward, you manage to write it well.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story and great MC character,I like MC said"to kill devil you have to become devil". anyway thank you for novel.
Just finished reading it (Chapter 75) and I have some problems with it, but I still really enjoyed reading it, so I'm giving it 4 stars. A shame it was dropped, but at least we got the ending which a lot of Authors don't do. I would recommend giving it a try, and hopefully the Author will pick it up again.
I dont like the Story Development. The Concept of this Novel was Good in the beginning but later on it become was only nonce It is really sad.................................. ....
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this stuff is real good. mc is ok not dull and stale or typical ML. Character buildup are good as well. all original characters made by the Author fits so well. keep it up. would love to read more of this stuff. ohhh if anyone knows any fanfic with Yu-Gi-Oh system let me know. tyyyy
Read to the last chapter, it was all worth it. Would love to read more chapters in the future. Hope Author that your doing well in the Real World. Just post whenever your ok, no need to rush it up and keep up with the demand. Thanks again for the chapters 1346516546515642132
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Haven't read it at all. But the title stood out? You may ask why, and I'll tell you, it's a great crossover. Exodia and devil fruit users both fail in the water.