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A Yu-gi-oh series about a young boy named Joseph Yusef who competes in the game of duel monsters. Joseph's deck is composed of cards from the books of Joseph Kohtz, along with his friends, Frank and Nick, who also compete in tournaments with him with their decks of Joseph Kohtz book cards. By dueling against all sorts of opponents, they believe they can conquer anyone who stands in their way. There's also Clyde Tinker, who's always trying to defeat Joseph in a duel because Joseph's the first one to beat Clyde in a duel.
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