/ Anime & Comics / Young Justice: Iron Man
摘要
A child in Gotham is fused with a piece of Tony Stark's soul, and sets upon building his own suit in his parents basement. That's until Batman knocks on his door with an invitation, and he ends up joining a league of sidekicks.
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This is good Young justice fanFics are Rare, Although there are only five chapters i can tell this Has the potential to be the best young justice fanfic out there.
This is just ridiculous. Author has picked up characters like Batman and Iron man and has absolutely butcherer them. They don't talk that way, they don't act that way... I mean, I understand the guy only has Iron man's memories, but even with that, he's way too petulant. Iron man is not a street fighting, vigilante type of hero at all, it would be one thing if it was to just test his armor, but on a daily basis? Seriously? Iron man's memories didn't give him any perspective? And that Batman... don't even get me started on that.
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*banging my spirit stone on the table* take em,take me all,just keep releasin them cute chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Plz plz plz plz 🙏🙏🙏 don't drop and continue you have my full support. Story is interesting I think you should follow the movie world story line as many people don't know much about comic story plus I think movie story line is good.
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this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san!
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it's a fresh air for me. good fic.good idea. mc has memory of Tony stark. author said because he assimilated with Tony's soul his intellegence is also similar to Tony. he is still a kid.he is mature for a kid.so that's good too. I wonder what's the future for this fic. I hope he build nanotech that can assimilate with his body giving him redicules strength and healing factor. and build an army of machine like how Ultron did. also hope he find some good metarial for his nano tech something that won't get destroyed easily by some kryptons lol.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.