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[WARNING: Mature Content]
Suzuki Satoru as Momonga was awaiting the server shutdown on his throne in the Great Tomb of Nazarick. When he was suddenly transported into a new world in which he has no information about the world, however, his goals are set, he must find the Great Tomb of Nazarick and restore it.
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寫檢討Pretty good novel it's somewhat like the other novels being a light hearted MC (Saving people etc.) all in all decent yet not that dark for story wise Summary, he saves heroine he builds castle he saves heroine again etc. Still good novel though
Скорее бы продолжения. Это единственный фанфик оверлорд/меч который я знаю и он крут. Спасибо автор, надеюсь вы вернётесь. Гадские 140 символов, надоело.
Writing Quality: Reading dialogues is like bathing in sand or watching two planks of wood talking to each other, it feels very awkward and robotic. Not to mention putting useless "filler" chapter that dont really give anything to the story from my point of view. Stability of Updates: It's good Story Development: The chapters are very short so after 20 chapters of reading nothing happened, there are plot holes from the very start of the story. "I have business in city" Proceed to forget about that, sure. Braindead sl#very moment with even more common heroine who gets beaten up. Character Design: It's probably the worst of them all, Cinde or whatever her name was is a completely braindead character with this personality that i hate, using 0 amount of brain while acting. Momonga isn't really momonga but hey its au so i dont really put it in rating here. The first Villain (The rapppppper if you catch what i mean) is another braindead character who noticed the guy who is about to kill him only when hes behind him not hearing his 4 bodyguards getting absolutely destroyed next to him. I literally stopped reading after it becase the talk between 2 or 3 guards of this sleppy joe syndicate made my skin crawl, literally eating butter with butter. World Background: seems interesting giving it 4*.
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basically ainz wakes up somewhere else instead of nazarik and looks for him with no knowledge of nazarik. Since there are only 3 chapters, I can't say much, but the author seems to have enough knowledge about overlord spells. or makes good use of the wiki. keep it up dude, let's read impact.