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I don’t own any of this I just want to share it to others because i really like and appreciate its content and the story behind it.
You can read it in fanfiction.net. I share it here because its very hard to find a gold there so hope you enjoy it.. sorry NaruHina fans?
A man wakes up to find himself inside the world of Naruto experiencing it via a video game. Forced to fight to survive, he sets upon a path of self-discovery, whether to save this world or destroy it.
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I started to read it but stopped in chapter 1 cause mc wants to move in with naruto and that's it I hate when mc babysitting others plus mc Is stupid orphan and wants to move in with the village jincurici dummass
tbh, i dont like this story at all. Mc is delusional, pathetic, flirt with many girls yet still single, and when he had a chance he push it away(when he decline to take yukiko to konoha) and i dont know why there is so many good review...maybe author delete the bad one
Finished reading. Few spelling mistakes but readable. Good plot. Felt little forced at the end but i did like it. One of the completed gamer fanfic
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rated full 5 for no reason, havent read yet, kinda looks interesting. Im kinda interested in naruto again ever since i saw the clips of itachi and listened to the sad ost's lol. also wanted to shout out sakura, literally everyone, even side characters have tragic pasts but sakura out here just chilling and being a total failure, smh even failed to kill obito or atleast blind him? really dont like sakura but itachi was the main hero in my opinion, sorry about the rant but **** yeah m8
The book itself is fantastic but my only complaint is the ending itself likeee whyyyy? why author-nim? why can't you just let yami live in there it's sooooo not ok ackkk but overall it's like a masterpiece.
The occasional sentence where you have to stop and think what was supposed to be, but other than those this is perfectly readable. MC Yami has clear motivations and how he thinks even if he occasionally goes stupid. I would say he was well written. The world building heavily piggybacks on the Naruto world as you would expect from a fanfic. However, the new element that are added are poorly explored and unsatisfactory. Dungeons, only goes to one. I assume there is one in all 5 villages since he could start in any of them. Only visits the one in Konoha. Probably had the opportunity to visit the mist one when they where there. Gains the ability to travel to other worlds. Never uses it. Ending, reveled that everything was just a game. Walks out of vr arcade with irl gf and the arcade disappears and gf doesn’t remember it. Is stated that there are a lot of vr arcades so don’t really know why this one is that special besides…. It is hinted at him still having his rennegan, but it ends right after and doesn’t seem like this will continue. It is a decent fanfic where MC makes some major changes to the story and it explains how it effects sasuke but everyone else besides those he kills or saves change. Many of the unique elements are under explored and a “it was just a dream ending”
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Good story. MC isn't op and ruthless in the beginning, which was a breath of fresh air considering all the op MC kills everyone fanfics I read. The ending was bad; it felt rushed and forced. I was hoping for the MC to start his own clan. It was hinted by Hiruzen that he has the potential to start his own clan. And what was weird was that he forgot his custom teammates. Like what happened to China and Zaku and Ko after the chunin exam. They were never mentioned. It was like they never existed. The author didn't talk about them or at least hint at what happened to them. It is a solid book with long chapters, which makes it better. So 4.4 overall. If you like fanfics where the MC has real character development, then this is a must read
Man, it was awesome the I was stuck like a glue awesome story and how he does things truly amazing worthy of praise. if it got an anime or manga adaptation then it will one of the best trust me. there are some things that he didn't do like collect leaves and stuff but it's still one of the best novels ever readout of the 50 or so ones. I am very thankful for making this novel. even if you won't read it maybe I still say thanks for making it.
Everything about this was perfect other than the repetitive things, like bite me, or how the world didn’t make sense by adding Pokémon into the mix. I mean it was a fun idea but I kinda wanted it to be just Naruto.
I love this, there's a lot of new characters and it's easy to read. Only the ending kinda make every reader frustrated and complain, it's like when you almost "finish" it but she stop it... Uncomfortable, kinda hateful. But you love the process lmao
This is why people dont use webnovel? Doesn't give a duck about people outaide the site, im sure mods actually see this stuff and dont remove it because its better for their app.
Its amazing the onky bad thing Is that he made haku a girl this might be my favourite ff 10/10 definitely recomend it and he chose all the routes i would apart from something i would accept both quests for danzo give him the body quest completed then kill him
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I 've read the fanfic on the original site and it is with certainty one of the best naruto ffs that I have ever seen although the ending felt a bit rushed.
everything was fake, what can i say? meaningless journeys are such a killer, you really went the matrix route did ya?
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I loved it my only regret was the ending I wish it could've kept going.Sadly all good things must come to an end so I will simply give it 5 stars and say my farewell.
I'm OK with the sharing of stories in different site's or even languages but did you at least ask permission before posting this here? Cause I think the author of this story complained about this happening once but with his other Fan fiction story "The Spider".