Worst Soul Reaper

I just don't like the MC, he is as interesting as watching paint dry, I only have a small basis on what he looks like(tallish? purple blueish hair), his powers were first intreaging but too OP to start with then confusing and then finally boringly average fanfic powers, quick mention to him saying he can't use kido because of his zanpakto implying he does not practice but then immedietly pulling a number 90 out of his ass. The way the MC interracts with the world and people around him because he cannot decide if he wants to be boring as paint/ a enthuesiastic know it all/ or a chheky non funny guy. The world and characters seem to shape and change reacting to the MC and to suit the authors goals.

Pretty good ff overall, Compared to this app standards, your writting surpasses 99% of the novels out there and I can say that your grammar its even better than mine (not that mine is a great thing) About the story development, pretty common start, with mc being reincarnated bla bla bla, then we have him being lazy which is a thing I don't like that much and how he became that strong isn't clear yet, as it's tremendously difficult to achieve the same quantity of reiatsu as people like yamamoto yet he already surpasses the former. Then we have the hueco mundo arc which is awesome making that the things I said before pretty much irrelevant as how awesome it. In my opinion, the arrancar thing was a bit forced as I can't see how yamamoto accepted this so easily but I can compreehend if you wanted to change his personality or something like this, after all, the arrancars in his division is a pretty unique and awesome thing you did to your plot. A thing I'm worried about: To the time when Ywach comes back in the final arc, MC will be too powerful and it won't be fun at all when he completely destroys him, since I personally prefer an well made fight with lots of chaps instead of a single attack and then ywach gets cut in half. Ideas to stop MC for being too much OP to the supposedly final arc since idk if you will write more after it. MC is put a restrain by unknown enemy/force since he surpassed the world standards. MC meets with soul king and...(you think of this) MC lost a part of his body(don't recommend that much but still an idea. MC reaches the limit of evolution and has to just increases the power of his division as he does another things through the world. ... In the start I was worried about the chapters' length since I finished one in just two minutes or so, but when I saw how much of machine you are, with the constants updates through the day, I couldn't complain about it. Five stars. Mc wasn't the type of person I liked in the start of the ff, but as the story progressed, I saw how he developed himself to being more of an badass so I'm happy with him. World background we all know so I don't have nothing to say here... Continue your good job, review from someone who accompanied your others ff in the past and saw how much evolves through them. Big congratulations to you. (Don't remember how to write the name of the last villain correctly since it has been two years since I read bleach)

lei hasta el capitulo 87, a pesar de que tenia partes donde se me hacia raro la forma que desarrollaba la historio el autor, de la nada empezó a preocuparte de que la historia siguiera al canon, después de llevarse a varios arrancar a su unidad, transformardolos en un raza que no existía, agregando poderes de otros animes y dándole a su zampakuto el poder de absorber a otra de la nada (solo lo hizo con una pero no tiene ninguna justificación de porque puede hacerlo), y ahora en el capitulo en que estoy abandonando esta historia, quiere matar a los capitanes para que siga la linea de tiempo del canon, le deseo mucha suerte al autor pero yo no puedo seguir leyendo esta historia