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World Online: Rise of the Strongest Hero

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作者: Aurora_Ayaka

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The accident that killed his entire family turned Elijah into a game addict who didn't care about his life anymore. After excessive playing, Elijah finally died upon completing the same game for the 1000th time.

[Kill the demon king and become a hero in the game world.]

[Customized rewards will be allotted.]

Elijah was willing to take the risk of diving into hell, hoping he could reverse the time and save his parents from dying. But upon progressing in the game with his task, Elijah discovers that there's something wrong with his system.

[Attention! Going without sacrificing an NPC will increase your mission failure by 90%!]

Elijah thought he was there to be a hero. However, why did he think that the system forced him to sacrifice NPCs in every way possible?

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    bluerabyss

    The story is well written and up to a good start. I dunno, I just noticed some inconsistencies...😅😅 First one is that I thought the Adventurer's Guilds offer free lodging to the members so how come the Elijah need to use 1 guild point so that he can stay in the dorms? One more thing is that his first mission should be rewarded with 10 gold coins but he only received 5 gold coins and with only 1 guild point... shouldn't be received like atleast 2 or maybe 3 guild point? 😅😅😅 Idk why I noticed those things but so far the story is good (a little slow like how I write my stories) but the story itself is good. Keep it up author! 💪💪

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    Fool_That_lampoons

    It is a basic typical novel but has potential. No novel is for everyone. Inevitably, some people won't like it, but I do. And if some of you give this novel a chance, you won't regret it. It's a slow-paced, novel which is to my liking with a world filled with adventure. Adios

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    JALLEN
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    Writing this review as of chapter 10. The story is well written but there some slight mistakes in grammar or some words missing in some sentences but it’s nothing major. I like the classic approach with the system. Also, the first chapter is quite good, it had me hooked and made me read 10 chapters in a row. If you like a story with video games elements, this one is for you!

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    Floxy_Belle

    I have to say, I'm really impressed! and I've only read 4 chapters, it has a nice plot, and the setting is on point👌 But I sense that Elijah is embarking on a wild adventure😏

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