/ Book&Literature / Wizard King
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Old Title: Godfather and Godson
Sirius Black was always said to be a playboy. What if he taught his godson a bit of his trade. A more mature and savvy boy-who-lived heads off to Hogwarts for his fourth year.
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I really tried my best to get through it, but it's just too awkward. The MC is constantly trying to be badass yet ends up looking like an edgy 15 year old 9 out of 10 times. The romance is extremely cringy and matches exactly the kind of embarrassing quality you'd expect from a writer building a 20+ woman harem. If you're young and clueless, this might still be a fun read.
It is looking very good and has Great potential. So keep up the good work and I can’t wait to see where you will take the story to.
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This story is amazing the writing is good and the plot is unique and one of a kind. I've read several other harry potter fanfics but this one takes the cake.
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One of the best harry potter fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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A refreshing take on Harry Potter. It still has the [Dumbledore bad] bashing like all fanfics has, but more toned down. It's still there, just not the focus of the story. It's pretty late right now, so I won't write a quality review. I like the fanfic very much, good job Author! Keep it up!
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Great Harry Potter fanfic which by now I consider myself a good judge of since I have read way too many by this point! Good writing with minimal grammatical mistakes and a believable story which expands the Canon uite nicely. Author has nailed the Sirius character and I like that we get a stronger more alpha Canon Harry instead of someone taking over his body! Also from what I can tell this Harry will be a very successful womanizer to make his Uncle proud 😊 😉 Keep up the great story author San and I look forward to any and all future updates! Note this is a review after reading 26+ chapters which I want to point out are fairly long compared to other fics so you could count it as about 70+ chapters in other works 👍
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All i can say is that the story is very well written. It fill up all the gaps many fan-fics and even the original just gloss over. Great work author plz don't drop.
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Great story, love it, want to see more, author-sam!!!! Looking forward to see how triwizard tournament and much more. Can't wait, keep up the good work!
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Well, this is my novel and I think it is a piece of art. 100 hundred years into the future, people will be looking back on this date as I put pen to paper and created this wonderful piece of art! Remember this date because you are part of history! Ha, just joking, this is a trashy fanfic with me running wild with my imagination.