/ Anime & Comics / With Bare-Bones
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Dying isn't the best, so why not make the most of it? Even if all you have is the Bare-Bones to keep moving forward.
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please don't read this for the better anyone who is thinking of reading this should just go away. mc from the start was going amazing but at chapters when he went from an average smart guy to an idiot with 0 iq. if u think I'm wrong then prove me wrong.
Criminally underrated Chainsaw Man fanfic.Characters are great, you care about them, they interact in natural ways you don't often see on Webnovel, they actually grow as the story progresses--they're just good, well-written characters. Especially the MC. His growth as a character is amazing.Story Progression could do with some work. The relationship between the MC and his love interest is rushed at first, which was hella confusing because it came out of nowhere, but it does become more natural as the story progresses.Writing quality is great. Probably not perfect but I didn't see anything when reading through it and neither did any mistakes break my immersion (so there's no easy to spot mistakes).More than anything, this feels like it could actually take place in Chainsaw Man. It's not a one dimensional power fantasy where the MC drools over Makima or Power or Himeno and just breezes through life. It's difficult to properly explain but it's just dark enough to be taken seriously while still injecting comedy to keep things a little light just like the original Chainsaw Man series.
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great story, regular updates, good character and world development, looking forward to the romance and more interactions with other characters in the work! keep going author san, i just hope you don't forget some characters, i almost forget he has contracts with demons.
The story and writing is really good and paired with a great and consistent update of chapters. The mixing and mashing of the worlds of CSM and OnK feels really smooth and doesn't seem to feel forced, same could be said for the character development as they have the feeling of depth behind each one.
first off, the update schedule and pacing are top notch in my opinion. So far, the only real issues I see are due to early stages of character development and this doesn't mean the author needs to speed it up it just an issue that all starting stories have as the readers haven't seen enough of the characters motivation to truly Juge their actions and words. other than this I can see a bright future and fan base for this fanfic as long as the author continues with motivation and grace.
it's great, good, amazing whatever it is. but as you know it would be amazing if it got continued until the ending that's all thanks for the wonderful fanfic
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(as of 25 ch) Great writing quality, but absolutely terrible story development 10 ch into of the story. It becomes a slice of life, and you read about a child mc going to school, and training. Character design, update stability and world background are all good