/ Fantasy / Willow by The Lord
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Willow Dean is forced to flee from the place she called home, boarding a train that will soon take her to a place she never knows exist. Thing seems to be different that its appearance, Willow finds herself trapped in a world of an unknown - a world where she doesn't belong to.
Things get worse and turn twisted when she catches the Lord's attention.
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Just from the synopsis, I was drawn to this book. I am a sucker for runaways and I am eagerly waiting for more updates to see what unfolds in Willow's life.
The only flaw I can think of this work is... The stability of updates. It seems kind of inconsistent. The rest? Is excelent. The premise is quite creative here, and so far the webnovel is brilliant. Keep it up.
I really like the way the book is written, but with some more powerful verbs and feeling, it can make it even better. It has some good parts in the story and I like it.
So excited to follow Willow’s journey already! Can’t wait for more chapters. Although there are so mang cliffhangers that keeps me exciting to read more.
the story itself has potential. the writing is interesting and easy to understand, and the characters are well-drawn out, I like it when the story progresses slowly. the cover does need I little work. overall a good work.
The plot has great potential and your writing skills make it even more interesting,eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters,keep writing,all the best
One of the things I like about this book is that it is written in a relatable language which makes it easy and interesting to read. However, the author can work better on the book cover. Aside that, I really recommend this book.
I'm big on word effiecency. By that I mean clarity. Trim the fat from your paragraphs and your will be more effective Some power verbs could punch up the writing as well. Other than that you've crafted a great character the reader can empathize with, and that is so important, good job
Hello readers, this is a fantasy romance story that I am very excited to share with those who loves magical creatures. The book surely needs major editing but I believe the plot will keep you intrigued. So, give it ago!
The story has great potential. The author has really good skills. I like how she uses the little details to slowly build up suspense. The characters are also really relatable, I find myself getting immersed in the story. Good job author!