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Kira Koharu, a young man who loved watching anime, especially when the anime version of Godzilla was first released, then the second movie.
"Damn, This Godzilla is better than any other Godzilla movie, even the movie so called Godzilla : King Of Monsters won't compare to this masterpiece."
"I mean look at this Godzilla who is freaking at 300 meters tall, a true overpowered monster."
Then a few months later, a trailer of the third movie was released, Kuro was dumbfounded at the new trailer.
"Holy Fuck is that King Ghidorah, but all of its heads are just basically flying with no body, I can't wait for it to be released!"
But one night, he was walking down on the stairs to get some water, but he accidentally miss a step and fell on the stair, the first one to land is head then his body.
The impact was really hard that he instantly died before he can watch the movie.
Then he was transported on another world on a form of Godzilla with a System.
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This is my very first written story, English is not my native language, so I might mistype something.
I will upload every chapters that I have written immediately.
I can probably released chapter for today or tommorow.
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Knowing that many people enjoyed reading my work, I can't help but to be happy right now. Thank you for enjoying my very first written work and I hope you enjoy the stay. Your faithful author ~TheFriendlyWeeb
The idea was good, but not well executed. Beginning with the protagonist being a super protector of '' Alice '', a dragon he encountered and protecting her as if they had known each other, besides giving him treasures and letting her absorb his atomic energy, basically a leech. Then he finds another dragon and he simply gives her his invaluable blood even if they literally have just met. Well this story just pisses me off what the protagonist does. Sorry for bad English, I'm writing this review by google translator.
I did not want to check it again! But this is screaming. The story is not bad, but the Kira is practically with the mentality of a pussy, it's like certain MCs that save that girl and for no real reason she falls in love with him! I say you overcame this time ... suddenly Ophélia who does not even care about anyone chooses Kira as WTF partner? It's okay that Kira was human in his past life, but like lightning he kills monsters without pity while he grabs and saves the humans? I do not understand, I say if you have humanity you save even the monster even though you know it will be a disaster! For min humanity is not just for humans, see that there are many animals with humanity too and they are often more human than us! I'm sorry to say that ... but harem spoils the whole story! Every new novel or new fanfic I see this fetish of authors by harem! What is the problem of writing a story without a harem? It's as if they say that without a harem it becomes rubbish! I have to say, Kira is very innocent and *****! Kira could give treasure or a weak technique to Ophélia! But why give the Supreme Blood of a Kaiju to her? Ophélia let him pick up treasures and Kira still accepts it? Blood being so precious ... hate it! Ophélia is a parasite of the blood and Alice is parasite of atomic energy! Dude, do not you think of making romance instead of fucking a harem? Another thing, why is she a woman for every corner? Men are so rare ... this world must have almost been extinguished by a powerful being who had fetishes by beautiful women and almost decimated all men! And more ... for some reason the woman is always stronger than man what? I understand there may be some, but any woman is stronger than even MC! Next time add the lineage Allheaven Godzilla, it will be the most powerful lineage in the universe!
“I have to get used to it since God told me that this world was a very cruel one, Then I have to be the most cruelest person or the cruelest monster ever!" Kira seriously said, just as the God said to him this world where Dog eats Dog. So far, the MC hasn’t done a single cruel thing so I’m confused why even add that in there? So far he’s decided to protect some random dragon like his life depends on it, and then when a woman tried killing this dragon he didn’t seem to give a ****, letting her go like nothing even happened. He even went out of his way to kill evil monsters, saying he wouldn’t have done it if they were good or neutral.
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The idea is good, but the story is typical jp isekai novel, summary of this novel is OP MC killing male monster left and right, and of course helping female no matter what it race left and right, seeking female companion left and right, because every female who see him get wet pussy, god damn it. Well it is just another author wet dream novel. Feel bad for Godzilla who now become horny teenager.
Another guy who cant get a girlfriend so he blames guys, making a story in the MC will protect every woman and let them do what they want, then kill all males with out asking questions... Geez and this is popular?
There is no logic in this fic! Alright, the beginning is like in other fanfics, where MC reincarnates in another world! I found it interesting a monster fanfic! In just a few chapters, Kira already knows Alice and still feels she needs to protect her. Nani? Kira kills any male, no matter what race it is! But just look at the female and Kira is there, I'm not cruel to kill them! Is it logical? Reckless use of power! Kira was playing with Alice using her powers! Suddenly jumping, falling from the ground it was like throwing a bomb-h only radioactive, killing countless life forms in the process! Well ... maybe that's the humanity referred to by the author! Ophélia, aparace without more or less! And when you set your eyes on Kira, you want him as a companion! Kira, for no reason ... gives her free blood and still strengthens Ophélia! Nani? I mean ... after barely meeting, Ophelia, is her friend already a potential harem? More than nonsense! Nor does it come with excuses like ... it's fate or anything like that! In fact there are strong women, but in this fic, all are as powerful as men! I bet even the sovereign of the Omniverse is a woman! And why, Baby Godzilla is female, have you noticed that with MC we only see females? I'm starting to think that, she's also a potent member of the harem! Instead of father, he's stepfather ... As for the battle of Kira vs. Turtle King and Tree I do not know how many ... I do not think it's good! First, why the hell would anyone want to get hurt? Are not you making MC a masochist right?
Kira having humanity? He massacres monsters without mercy and on top only male! For the opposite *** it does the opposite ... this is the world where the strong rule! All women are leaders and strong! It is as if the author simply massacred the men of the world! Even this Baby Godzilla is femêa! Is it serious that Ophélia sucks his blood and still only compensates him with mere treasures of low rank? Sorry to say that ... but I'm disappointed in you! And Alice, what's the point of protecting her? It's just a parasite sucking MC energy! And Kira, for her misuse of this power ... simply massacred thousands or more, just toying with Alice! Seriously? Kira still says ... Oh ... I'm sorry! I must say this is the worst MC I have ever seen in my life! Okay, and one more thing, this harem is filling my bag dear! The trend towards this genre is great! Any novel or new fanfic has this ... is it so hard to write without putting harem in the middle?
Hmm... There are a TON of things that don't make sense in the beginning of the Novel. 1) Apparently Godzilla chants in order to release the laser beam from his mouth. 2) The System is a female and blushes. (Its a fukin System for fuks sake... how tf does a system blush?!) 3) He buys chicken from the System. (The author didn't mention the size, so all I can think of is a small normal chicken.) 4) Apparently from previous readers most of the leaders are women. (I have no issue with that, however from what I can infer from the other readers is that literally MOST or ALL of the Leaders women. Which sounds like a convential way of building a harem for the MC...) 5) (Check SageVarhar for the other reasons.)
I LOVE non-human protagonist novels. And it’s is really hard to find a good one. This is some thing that I NEED. Thanks for creating it. Hope you never drop this novel. It’s full of potential
It’s another one of those wet dream thingies. I’m going to presume the author is Chinese as the number of cliques is sickening especially the “I must protect this random girl I met just now and give her literally everything that is valuable” clique. Another one is the “I must strengthen this female character so it is acceptable for the main character to marry her by making her the biggest leach in existence” thing.
This is like.. the perfect novel. If you make someone reincarnate as a monster and don't make him overpowered, then it's better to just make him reincarnate as a human instead. A lot of novels make that mistake, but not this one. M.C is not some soft hearted sissy protagonist either. He lives up to the title, 'MONSTER'. And I like it a lot. This is how it should be. I just hope that the author completes this wonderful piece of art and not just abandon it. More chapters...
Sorry but what can i write ... there are already people who wrote the points of why this is bad. I wont write much A you can go and read a litle but i droped it right from start B go and read reviews woth bad rating as theres mostly the info on, which it can improve and whats there that you may not like.
Interesting! I think you made a great choice, Looking foreword for more chapters Xmgdngjggjgnsfjfjstjjtskyskysykkyyksykskyskydkydykdkydkydykdykdykdykdykdykdykdykdykskysyksyksymdykdykdymsymdymdmydykd
Love where going with this the writing is good. You should add some of shin godzilla abilities and make him anti hero plz not some wimp later when he turned to human..
Like my freind reader say 1. it is a dog eat dog world yet nothing makes sense at all. He becomes Godzilla and everything is okay until he meets Alice. She has nothing to do with him, but he decides to protect her for no real reason. 2. Dragons are Rare or supposedly but Kira meets a new dragon almost every 2 to 3 chapters. If it is a male dragon he just kills them and ends it, but the female ones he becomes stupid that he does whatever they want him to do. 3/4/5. This is a dog eat dog world yet all the leaders are females why. The author says because he hates how the leaders of other novels are male and wanted to change that is alright, but the problem is this is a dog eat dog world, not a Japanese fantasy world. He basically made the men in this world become nothing more than just mindless slaves. I am sorry, but this would not work at all as men have a better way of hiding their emotions then women do as women tend to act more to their emotional side. This is why in these types of worlds men are the leaders. Another thing is that everyone here is a mindless idiot with no IQ. First, the leaders which are always female just say go kill if its dangerous. This is how this so-called dog eats dog world known to be mediocre and how a woman would not have survived long enough to become a leader by the way the author presents them. They could easily capture and tame the beast/dragon or negotiate with it to pull to their side yet they set off a mission to kill them instead without them doing anything. 6. Kira is irresponsible with his powers and his personality does not make sense at all. First, he says Alice protecting her with his life next when humans come to try to kill her he stops and spares them. The author says he does this because of his human personality still with him yet he killed a dragon a day ago and has no remorse for it. He plays around with his powers trying to play with Alice the red dragon and ends up killing millions of demons yet show little remorse like oh I felt bad and that is it. This does not seem like a human personality to me. 7. In Kingdoms, you have Kings and Queens as the leaders, but in Empire, the leaders are called Emperor and Empress. The Human Empire has a queen and King. 8. People get ridiculous power-ups in the next chapter with no explanation why. 9. The updates are good, but the problem is that whenever he updates the ranking of people and monsters he used a new chapter giving false hope when he could just add them to the Auxillary it makes reading more smoother. 10. The conversation between people is quite awkward along with the POV changes. 11. Another thing about Dog eat Dog world is scheming there is no scheming. The makes the world Background become a one as this story is everything, but dog eats dog world. 12. Godzilla is asexual if I am not mistaken making mating useless for it. This is so fucking stupid , MC dont make Any sense , i Lost a Lot of neurons Reading this
When i read this book, i feel like i'm watching a DC movie. At the first ten minutes (1chap) : Well that will not be REALLY GOOD, but it got the potential to be Good i guess. Then when they began to ****ed up (chap3) : Arh... And finally when you're in your car going back home : Well... at least they tried right ? Next time you will go see Marvel.
After reading all the available chapters, I have one word for this novel: OVERRATED! If it wasn't for the interesting concept of Godzilla and being able to turn into human, I would have never wasted my time on this.
the idea is good and has alot of potential and there are alot of updates :) the only thing i would have to criticize is the grammar; it is still readable but alittle hard sometimes :P its not a big minus because this flaw could be easily solved by a editor (: keep it up!
This is a 2 star for many reasons and I will list some of the problems. 1. it is a dog eat dog world yet nothing makes sense at all. He becomes Godzilla and everything is okay until he meets Alice. She has nothing to do with him, but he decides to protect her for no real reason. 2. Dragons are Rare or supposedly but Kira meets a new dragon almost every 2 to 3 chapters. If it is a male dragon he just kills them and ends it, but the female ones he becomes stupid that he does whatever they want him to do. 3/4/5. This is a dog eat dog world yet all the leaders are females why. The author says because he hates how the leaders of other novels are male and wanted to change that is alright, but the problem is this is a dog eat dog world, not a Japanese fantasy world. He basically made the men in this world become nothing more than just mindless slaves. I am sorry, but this would not work at all as men have a better way of hiding their emotions then women do as women tend to act more to their emotional side. This is why in these types of worlds men are the leaders. Another thing is that everyone here is a mindless idiot with no IQ. First, the leaders which are always female just say go kill if its dangerous. This is how this so-called dog eats dog world known to be mediocre and how a woman would not have survived long enough to become a leader by the way the author presents them. They could easily capture and tame the beast/dragon or negotiate with it to pull to their side yet they set off a mission to kill them instead without them doing anything. 6. Kira is irresponsible with his powers and his personality does not make sense at all. First, he says Alice protecting her with his life next when humans come to try to kill her he stops and spares them. The author says he does this because of his human personality still with him yet he killed a dragon a day ago and has no remorse for it. He plays around with his powers trying to play with Alice the red dragon and ends up killing millions of demons yet show little remorse like oh I felt bad and that is it. This does not seem like a human personality to me. 7. In Kingdoms, you have Kings and Queens as the leaders, but in Empire, the leaders are called Emperor and Empress. The Human Empire has a queen and King. 8. People get ridiculous power-ups in the next chapter with no explanation why. 9. The updates are good, but the problem is that whenever he updates the ranking of people and monsters he used a new chapter giving false hope when he could just add them to the Auxillary it makes reading more smoother. 10. The conversation between people is quite awkward along with the POV changes. 11. Another thing about Dog eat Dog world is scheming there is no scheming. The makes the world Background become a one as this story is everything, but dog eats dog world. 12. Godzilla is asexual if I am not mistaken making mating useless for it.
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