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摘要
Park.
He a some-what smart sophomore that plays soccer. However, he quickly meets a boy named Thomas. While failing chemistry, he needs Thomas to tutor him. Well, when things go wrong quickly, Park inhales some bad chemicals.
Hallucinations in his head, Park now has to deal with something even worse.
He can't like Thomas, right?
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I really like the storyline! The MC is someone you can easily identify with, and the dialogue is engaging. The description of events surrounding the characters is great. (author, once in the second chapter, autocorrect made soccer into succor. It screws me too, obviously not something that was intended / due to lack of knowledge) Overall very interesting, and I'm excited to see how the story continues building.
Chater is still a few but the story is good. If you write more then I'll read more into the future. Looking forward to more of your chapters!
I'm not really good at looking on grammars cause English is not my first language so, all in all the setting, story line and it's progress is good I like it I also loved this kind of genre ahhaha please do continue,...........
I like the story setting. Over all you just have to look into how you use your grammar and the right paragraphing system that will work best with you.Kudos.
The story is interesting. I can exactly feel the high school vibe right when I started reading. The MC is like your typical teenager that's struggling in his high school days. Anyway, I miss reading this kind of book, first person POV. Nice description author. 😉
I really love the storyline. The characters are interesting. I just think your writing can be improved a bit. I'm honestly engaged in the story and really can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work author!!