Why Bother Being a Hero?

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tt_g

I’m guessing this was inspired from the modern family fanfic by Alittlepiggy33, since that’s the most popular celebrity mc fanfic rn. However, for a fanfic based mainly around songs, I personally don’t think it’s as good. My main complaint is with how the songs are structured. There’s no reactions from other characters until the end, which I’m guessing is to keep the immersion, but honestly it makes the songs really boring cause there’s no special meaning or anything like that. Also, there’s already 20 chapters and 11 songs. At this rate, the author is burning through a lot of songs. It’s not a bad thing if the songs are done well, but they really aren’t. All the audience does is clap and congratulate him after his song, which decreases the impact of each song. Rather than each song being a banger, it feels like just another song.

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FlamingoFox

Overall, the concept of this novel/fanfic is pretty good. Its refreshing to see new and like a unique take to MHA. But, there's one thing that you kinda overlooked. So songs are usually taken from the feelings of the writers, their experiences in life, and what have they gone through in life whether from their own experience or grom observing wjha they see on their surroundings. Taking note of that, I can't seem to imaging the adults of this novel to just say its so cool that you've written a very good song. Don't you think they would've gind it weird that a kid is talking about love and whatnot in his songs? So while I love it, its's hard, for me at least, as I was always told that songs or poems are taken written with your heart and experience, I was always told that these are the expression of what you are. So again, the concept is good, but the execution of the character being able to write songs about being in love and all is quite hard to read. It would make it more realistic somewhat if you made the MC more mature before publishing songs.That's all, let me think about my review. Anyways this us just an opinion of mine. Thanks

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tikuskecetit

don't care about the story,i just want to read some good musical fanfic, thanks author

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BigMacLover

If you want to waste time this is your novel .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Winter_Whisperer

The fanfic is mediocre at best. Don't get me wrong. This has the potential to be good but the lack of planning and details brings the novel down. In a musical novel, the backstories and the storytelling needs to be intertwined and flow. I'll probably come back to this, and update the review after some more chapters.

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Dao_Of_Noodle

It is cool to see a mha story with out the focus of being a hero or villain. I will continue to follow this story and update my review when more chapters are released. The writing quality seems good. I cant say a lot about the update consistency, because the story is new. The Author has done a good job until now, please continue writing this fic. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Skyler_Felts

Nice to see a mha fic where the protag does some different thing than usual, keep up the good work

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Fajrin_murizki

story development is bad even in some chapter i don't fell the development just the song.more like a lyric than a story.lack response from people around. lack world background insert for the story.