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Schedule 1 chapter/ Day around 2 pm
Erin slowly looked up in front of him and saw a floating blue hologram appear in front of his eyes.
| Mana levels has reached minimum requirement
population levels have reached minimum requirement
Percentage of discovered land on planet 1975 : 100%
Evolution requirements have been met |
| Would you like to enter the new world?
Yes/No |
In his sleepy state, Erin did not think much about it and pointed to the yes.
| Congratulations Erin Silvers. You have entered the new world. Please wait for future instructions |
That’s when Erin realized that the world had changed.
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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
Hi, author here writing a review for my book because I am shameless 😅 So far I think my story is going in the right direction you can say otherwise under this review if you don’t think. I appreciate all critics.
Well, actually it has a lot of potential but seems to be overshadowed by the amount of "plot" (no, its actually half actual plot and a lot foreshadowing and maybe some filler here and there). There is still a few incomplete mistakes I.e : fair well = farewell (and its actually more so i just mention the one i remember) And the status format for the beasts and monster sometimes confusing I.e ; Health : high, Wisdom : Low But for humans the author used an actual numerical format (idk if its fixed like that but if she continues to use that format its bad because the information they gave is too vague) Rate : 4/4/3/4/3