/ Realistic / When Life Is Darker Than Black
摘要
Author of " My Possessive Lover ❤️"
*** Your Comments Are appreciated ****
everything in her life was best...
she had her family, friends and even now had a good and caring partner whom she was soon going to marry.
she loved him as much as he loved her.
but at the day of their marriage he appeared and destroyed everything she had, he killed everyone who came in his way.
he just wanted her.. she was his and he can't let her escape from him. NEVER!!
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this story can include mature content.
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
historia oscura e interesante, como me gusta xd...........................................................................................................
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I have read a few chapters.. the storyline progresses quickly.. the author's English is good enough to understand and even use describing words. However, many of those describing words are placed in awkward places of the sentences. I also wish there was more description on everything.. the setting, the characters.. etc. Good luck, author, please continue your hard word and improve your English.