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Great job on instead of choosing 1 system you are mixing it up by choosing 2 systems and 2 different gods that ars supporting him. Also hope there is a continuity of updates and great story character.
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GOOD strory please dont stop...........................................................................*.....................................................................................
Very good fan-fic. I need more and more chapters. This book has a very interesting story where main character has infinite mc future. I hope that you will not leave this work and will continue till its conclusion.
some characters in this fic (in Naruto World) talking like they are xianxia side characters....🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Very good fan-fic. I need more and more chapters. This book has a very interesting story where main character has infinite mc future. I hope that you will not leave this work and will continue till its conclusion.
pls dont stop, i like this novel...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
IM sure this kind of MC will just get use by people... Naive, pussy mc, i dont really like this MC.. 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎.................. ? 😐😐😐💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎
The development for character is very good and story is also very good Please don’t drop this ZZ Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z ZZ
More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More, More
It's such a shame that this novel was dropped. Although the grammar wasn't the best.... the story was really interesting with the anime+cultivator systems.
ANOTHER IGNORANT MC... HAHAHAHAHA. WHY DO THESE STUPID AUTHORS WANTS MC TO BE STUPID AND IDIOT? HAHAHAHA...... HAVE FUN READING COWARDS MC.......................................... WOOOOOO. THIS IS BORING THATS WHY I DIDNT EVEN READ IT HAHAHAHAHHA
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Please don't drop this novel and try to make the release rate faster and this novel very nice to read more chapter's more chapter's more chapter's please
How patetic why remove the memory? .... Just whyyyyyyyy ALL knowelger from earth .... Wolrd from anime Just everything ... I dont Buy This i read he ask to delete história memory i drop b. Y. E. Whyyyyyyyy. Whyyyyyyyy. Whyyyyyyyy
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