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what if naruto had the powerful six eyes with gojo's power {Completed}
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摘要
In the Hidden Leaf Village, Naruto Uzumaki has always been an enigma. As the host of the Nine-Tails fox spirit, he grew up isolated and scorned by the villagers. However, his life takes a dramatic turn during the Chunin Exams when he awakens a mysterious power within himself - the Six Eyes.
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Not what I was hoping for, the idea is great, but the execution of the story isn't good at all. Instead of clear writing of a story with great potential, it all seems like one BIG summary. Writing Quality is goodStory Development isn't horribleCharacter Designs are badAt the time of this review I assume it to be doneNo world background
I want to assume that this was written mostly using ChatGPT. It's basically a summary, there are many repeats of the same words across chapters and the same can be said about the dialogue. If it isn't Sakura who says that power can corrupt, its Sasuke or Jiraiya or the Hokage.Another reason why I think it's chatgpt is because the conversations are one-dimensional, and characters have none of Naruto don't have the right personality. Sasuke should be jealous, Sakura should be amazed but not put much mind to it, she is more of a child in mentality power wise than the others and should not really understand what power entails.