/ Fantasy / What! i was reincarnated in a yuri genre novel
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Roy Wijaya is a young man who can live a normal life, until one day he moves into the world of a novel entitled "Ren's fantasy world" as an antagonist who will die miserably in the story.
"Wait a minute, this is a Yuri genre novel"
"Have I been reincarnated as the antagonist..... NOO... I don't want to die!!"
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寫檢討Hi author, here I want to say that there will be a change in David's status, because in my opinion the status bar is too low. sorry for the sudden change, hope the readers can understand.if readers like this novel, don't forget the support. your support will be very useful for newbie writers like me 😊😊😊
while the idea of the story is good and a bit different. the execution of the story falls short. there are a lot of grammar errors, character all have flat dimension. the Mc of the story struggle seem to breeze though the problem, making story plot weak. If this story gets a strong edit,and be rewrote I will to give this story a second chance.
Wow...the story is really good, this is the first time I've seen Truck-kun fail to carry out his mission to make MC go to another world hahaha...continue the author waiting for the next chapter[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi guys, this is the author. I want to make an important announcement to you guys, from now on I will drop this novel, because I feel that all the time I give is not in accordance with the results I get. So once again I apologize and thank you for those of you who have supported me so far. see you all.
This is one of my favorite novel. The storyline is really good. I will recommend everyone to read this novel as this one has a huge potential.
作者 Tasiya_Putri
TRUE REVIEW FROM MY HEAT 🖤--------------------------------------------------------True Overall rating = 2 star MAXMAIN POINTS TO NOTICE :-1. MC is dumb to the point of complete abuse.( who reveal their special ability like an open book to someone they don't know).2. No true motivation to move forward ( it like 'oh, I got transmigrated then let's get strong', WHY can he not try to avoid the plot or atleast show emotions like fear or excitement).3. Feels a little too imaginary (he have a system that helps him from the beginning without introducing itself and revealing it's purpose of existence).4. No emotional stability ( who act like a real son on first encounter with a unknown woman).5. world's background is somewhere in the soil where no one can find it.