章節 7: Chapter 6
This is a replacement chapter. There was a minor issue in the original. I have corrected it and reposted it. I will later on go ahead an rewrite this chapter and a few others, but that is a while off. I want to finish part three first. Sorry guys, we will have to live with my early awkwardness . . .
Okay, here it is: The Two part epic event! Naruto's Birth! WOOOOTTT!
Wait, it's not that epic. I wish it was but it's not. I am not that good of a writer. Still, I think it turned out pretty well. It was hard. In fact it was one of the hardest things I've ever written. Think about it: How do you make Naruto's Parents survive while maintaining the basic scenario presented by the show? All while making it responsible to have happened. Think that is easy? Think again! In fact, it was so hard and so important I prevented myself from posting a single chapter of this story until the first draft was written. There was no point in posting this story unless I could explain that.
It took me a few days to get it right. I ended up planning it out like you would plan a mystery novel or battle strategy. I worked on it at work. They gave this little salesforce notebook (to celebrate a new system we were about to use) and I used it to jot down ideas. It was fun planning it that way but still took a while.
What you are about to read is the end result of that work. I hope that the scenario seems responsible and is a fun read. It is in two parts, so beware of that. Luckily, I am releasing both parts today. So, stay with me.
PS: I did receive your reviews from the last chapter. I'll respond to them after part two is over.
THE WILL OF FIRE
PART ONE
Chapter 6 - Naruto's Birth, part one
"It Hurts, y'know!"
Her screams echoed through out the cavern. It was few hours later and Kushina was in the middle of giving birth. It drove right into Minato's heart. She irradiated pain as she tried to push their son out of her. Minato had never seen her in this much pain before. It scared him. Suddenly, the reality of losing the two of them became real. It was almost too much for his heart to bear.
Minato tried to focus on his task. He had to restrain the Ninetails. It had to stay in if his family had a chance of survival. He was NOT going to lose them! But it was so hard watching her scream like that. He wanted to take away the pain but he didn't know how. He felt so helpless.
When he finally spoke up about his fears, he was chided by Lady Biwako, "You're the Fourth Hokage! Act like one! A man would have dropped dead from such pain a long ago. But women are strong!"
Minato looked at his wife. He knew that she was strong. She was even stronger than him. It was one of the many reasons that he loved her so much. He hoped she realized how much he loved her. Just as he loved their son. They just to get through the night.
Minato to could feel the Ninetails writhing to get out. It fought with all it's might to get out of her. It took a lot to suppress it. But, he couldn't keep up suppressing him for too much longer! Naruto had to get out soon or the Ninetails might actually get out.
Minato couldn't let that happen. So, he fought on. But he slowly losing the battle to keep the Ninetails in. Then it was over. One more push then he was out. Naruto was born! Minato was overcome with emotion. He was a father now! His son was here. Minato wept with joy as he saw Naruto for the first time. He was his beautiful baby boy. He was all theirs from his blond tuff of hair to the sound of his cries. He was theirs. No one could take that away from them.
While Minato was lost in thought, Lady Biwako brought their son to see his mother. Kushina looked into her son's eyes. She was so happy and relieved that he was finally here. Biwako left him next to her so they could meet. She slowly rolled over to her side and she pulled him in close. She smiled at her new son and said, "Naruto, we finally meet."
Lady Biwako smiled as she watched the pair. She spoke softly to them, " He's a healthy babe." She patted the boy affectionately, "He'll be a fine shinobi one day."
Kushina looked at the older woman. She owed Lady Biwako so much that she may never be able to repay her for. But she had to try.
"Thank you."
Lady Biwako ignored the statement. She did not expect to praised for her efforts. It was unnecessary. So, instead she said, "You need your rest." She reached out reached out for the boy,
However, Kushina pulled Naruto in closer. She didn't want to let go. She wouldn't let go. Finally, after a moment, Lady Biwako gave in and left the boy in his mother's arms. She moved away to give the new family their space.
Minato rejoined his family. The three of them were together at last. He had never been so happy in his life. He's perfect. He thought as he touched his son's head. He was a father at last!
"Kushina, Thank you."
Kushina looked at her husband. Minato could see that she was overcome with emotion as well. She was practically to tears. Something Minato rarely ever saw. Then again, this was the best day of their lives. So, it was okay to be like this. Their son was here.
"Minato . . ."
Minato was about to suggest that they seal up the Ninetails again when he noticed something was wrong. There was an intruder in the room! His instincts screamed. They ordered Minato to be ready. He had to protect his family. They were vulnerable right now. He had to get them away from here.
Minato scanned the room. A short distance away a Masked Intruder appeared. He slipped right through the barrier. It was like it wasn't even there! This was the highest security barrier they could create. This intruder got past the ANBU and slipped through the barrier he erected. Minato didn't know who he was, but that he was dangerous.
Minato created two shadow clones. He had to get his family away from here. They were vulnerable. He had to protect them! He's after Kushina. Minato thought as he planned his next move. He would become a distraction as his clones scooped up his family. They would hide them then return to fend the attacker off. Minato didn't like the plan but under the circumstances it was the best one he had.
It didn't go quite as planned though . . .
The Masked Intruder attacked first. He sent a kunai flying in their direction. He targeted Kushina and the baby. Minato blocked the strike. His clones took the opportunity to grab his family. Before they could get away though, the intruder attacked from behind. The clone that had Naruto barely escaped intact. However, the one carrying Kushina wasn't so lucky. She was taken away before Minato could stop him.
Fear and rage boiled inside Minato. I have to save her! He thought as he pursed their attacker. While his remaining clone headed off towards home.
It's only a small change I know, but I did remove that spelling error. Thanks for your patience!
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