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In a distant planet filled with a mysterious energy, war and death are common place and seen all around. The powerful prey on the weak as the world follows the law of the jungle. The strongest man in the world has been loyal to his country for all his life until it takes everything he has and dares to ask for more. Fed up with the ways of this world, he stands his ground against the country he shed blood for, but it only becomes the first step on his journey on a much needed adventure.
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Wow Cool This book is too awesome. The world building is excellent that it doesn't bores you or maked you skip the line. The plot is very interesting as the book hooks you into a brand new world wher you wish to explore more and more. The characters are exciting to meet, pertty well written. The writing style is great. Loved it. Good work author
Giving a 5 star review for the first time well the start is just amazing man Orian literally lived up the whole freaking story and the back story in the start where he was getting all fired up man! that was amazing!! Im following your story let see where it goes!!
Well, where do we start? First of all, I really enjoyed reading it. The plot is also very interesting. I don’t understand why people were saying paragraphs were long. It was perfect in my opinion. But anyway, everything was good. I already added it in my collections.
Nice work so far. Just that the paragraphs appear to long which is not recommendable for most user. Can't wait to see what Orion has in store in the upcoming chapters.
Pretty cool story, not gonna lie. The world building of the story is on point, and the plot is structured and very intriguing. Great job on this book.
This science fiction story explores the brutal reality of life on a distant planet, where power and strength reign supreme, and the weak are easily dominated. The protagonist is the strongest man in the world who has dedicated his life to serving his country, only to be betrayed by those he trusted most. As he rebels against his former masters, he sets out on a journey to discover the secrets of the mysterious energy that fuels this planet and find his place in the world. The author paints a vivid picture of a world that is both alluring and terrifying, with its unique blend of technology, magic, and warfare. The story is fast-paced, with plenty of action and unexpected twists that keep the reader engaged from beginning to end. The character development is well-executed, with the protagonist evolving from a loyal soldier to a rebel leader with a cause. Overall, this is an entertaining and thought-provoking read that is sure to appeal to fans of science fiction and adventure.
Great novel! captivating story and well-developed characters. Pacing is great too. Good job author!
Great story and I hope you'll come with more and another great chapter. The character and the story is just amazing. I hope i can see more chapter. Great Job, well done author!!
Really good novel! Loved the concept and good execution so far. However maybe you should try making smaller paragraphs. For me on the computer also they felt a bit long, so for mobile readers; which is a large portion or readers, it might be a bit too long. But other than that, I have o complains except that it has too few chapter!!! Keep up the amazing work author!
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Good work so far. I just think that some paragraphs seem too long to me, and it's something I don't recommend too much that can make the reading boring. But otherwise everything is fine, good job author.
Really enjoyed the world and character description and set up at the start, it set the stage for what was about to come. I love how descriptive the battle scenes are as well!
Loved how it started. The character has been described very well. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the great work. Happy writing!!
Love this!! Great character description and world building, can’t wait for more from you!! .
Yo! Shameless author here! This is my first work but its a story im really excited about! I’ll do my best to live up to your epectations and make this worth your time:p