/ Anime & Comics / Warrior Of Eight Gates In DXD
摘要
Might Guy of an Alternate Naruto-verse is transported to the DXD universe after opening the Eighth Gate.
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Sorry for the simple Synopsis but that's all I got, it's literally what will happen.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters portrayed in this Fan Fiction nor do I own the cover pic.
Peace.
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
This looks to be dropped but I have nothing better to do so I’ll review anyways. The first 5 out of the 6 total chapters are just a poorly written recap of Guy in Naruto and then his fight w Madara. Feels like it took too long, especially since if you’re reading this, odds are you know how the story goes so I would much rather the author have spent more time on the actually new content (in dxd). Grammar is pretty mid with plenty of spelling mistakes and seemingly not a lot of proofreading but it’s readable and really that’s all that matters in this app full of trash. Basically I came here hoping to satisfy a bit of a craving for some more Guy and Eith Gates content and am leaving pretty darn dissatisfied.
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