摘要
Reborn with X amount of wishes our protagonist must become the most powerful warlock ever and go through the multiverse. Will he be OP or will he be weak to strong that’s up to the fates (you).
This is a story as a experiment using readers comments to alter the world. In other words all suggestions and comments count and matter.
I do not own any show, game, anime, book ect. That is seen in the story they belong to their creators this is not a story for profit but purely entertainment and boredom.
First world:? Idk yet we will see after you make the first choice
標籤
-- 推薦票
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novel 4,5 star but never seen a bullshit as big as the one in chapter 5 so less 1 star ---------------------------------------------------------------------
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Meh it’s an okay read .........................,..............................................................................................
Interesting but could be better. The olympians gods are turned into a joke. Inventing monopoly when there isn’t even proper currency. Cards games would have been much Where did he get the Marvel ores? What about the other pantheons? The way they went from 6 villages/towns/cities to 6 kingdoms is weird. They should have gotten 1 holy kingdom/empire and spread the faith to the surroundings countries and further. Where are the kingdoms located? What countries did they replace? With magic being taugh and encouraged, and their faith remaining strong, how did they fare against christianism/islamism? What about technology? What about the f*cking timeline of the world? The altered history? The reincarnated guy see the phoenix force in another new goddess and doesn’t question it. The reincarnated goddess knows that her father is a reincarnated guy and has no questions about it. It’s supposed to be a Percy Jackson fanfic, but there is barely any Percy Jackson and other demi-gods. When they finally appear, they barely got 1 chapter worth of screen time.
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Was gonna give this a try since title Sounded good but synopsis says MC having X amount of wishes, system, and also seeing the tag Harem killed it. Will mot even try.
Honestly its a great read! There are various elements that really added to the overall reading experience. Only flaw I’d talk about is slight errors here and there. They arent very frequent so it doesnt affect the reading experience much! Btw the slight mistakes can be explained; the author writes this on a phone so autocorrect can be annoying!
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he is the same as the other Greek gods i.e fucks women abondons his children it's disgusting . everyone hates Zeus because of this and you just made character similar to Zeus