/ Fantasy / Waltz with Death
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"So this is what they mean when they say your life flashes before your eyes when you die."
Betrayed. Battered. Broken.
Evangeline Vermillion has had enough of her pathetic life. She was young—only in her early 20s—and she had planned to end it all by setting herself on fire.
That was how she met Death—cold, dark, tall, and...handsome? Huh. Who knew the Grim Reaper could look like that? He takes her hand and guides her through the In-Between, the sacred realm between the Land of the Living and the Afterlife. Together, they revisit her most important memories. From the misfortunes of her childhood, to the chaos and bloodshed of the wrong kinds of love, Evangeline must confront the demons of her past to get to The Other Side.
Through all of the pain and anguish, Death stands with her, an enigmatic companion and unlikely confidant. And in their brief waltz between realms, Evangeline finally finds what she always wanted but never had: to belong and to be loved.
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The story is good and Death is a interesting character. I am not a big fan of FL but this seems fun you should give it a try if you like this genre. The updates are constant and the story is progressing nice.. Overall the book is nice. Keep it up Author!
Good work Author. Nice pacing you have here. The reading experience for me was quite smooth. The plot is great even though it's nowhere near what I read, but I clicked on this, and don't regret it at all. No complaints yet other than the update rate, rest is all good.
So where do I start with this book - the plot, world-building and characters are so on point. The plot is definitely quite an intriguing one and has a great mystery vibe to it. I love how we're slowly learning about the mc as we see her memories. The only thing that I'll nitpick about is the way it sometimes seems like she's referring to herself in third person. Maybe it's just me being well me again. Anyway grammar's really good, a few tense mixing here and there but it's pretty minimal. Anyway, I'm excited to see where this story goes.
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being a lover of FL novels myself i have to say waltz with death is amazing 😍 . whatever it is your doing rn stop and check it out .[img=strong]
Impressive writing so far, the punctations, the writing the story telling all on point! I love how the characters interacts with each other that's one of my favorite aspects when it comes to writing and reading and you pulled it off so well! Keep going!
Though it’s not really my type of genre but it’s an extremely well written novel. The characters are surprisingly fleshed out despite the lack of chapters. Emotions and situations are described painting a clear picture in the readers head. The grammar is top notch and the word choice is stellar my only nitpick is at times it feels like the story is dragging and over explaining a topic, despite it being relatively simple and that the dialogue at times sounds a bit inorganic
Waltz with Death is very well written, with the occasional punctuation error or awkward sentence structure which is rare on Webnovel. As a fellow WN writer, I went ahead and pointed out some areas for writing development for you in the first half of Chapter One before focusing on the story. The use of 1st person narrative as opposed to the 2nd or 3rd person narratives, and present versus past tense, makes it a bit harder for a reader to get wrapped up in the story. Overall, the book has an interesting premise and should only get better with time. It's a nice and unique story that deserves attention.
Dope story, excellent concept and it's definitely got me hooked.I can't wait to read more.
Hands down to 1st and 2nd chapter. It got me laughing! Everything is great and well written! She really thinks he was a lost cosplayer and she was like:
one of your bests! I hope you keep going with this novel, the beginning up to the 12th chapter where i stopped so far was great! I hated your other book but this one was a great read! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Keep going author!
The writing is good and the pacing is also great! I really liked Evengeline's personality and Death is really on another level! Their relationship is also very cute!
It's punctuation,character,plotting are all good.impressed surerly recommend it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Loving it]
Very nice starts and I really like when the mood changes. In the beginning, I was sympathize with the mc but after she met with Death, their conversation became hilarious so it's a nice way to lift up the mood
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Wow! This book had my emotions skyrocketing. I'm not sure how many times I laughed, how sad, and how close to tears I felt while reading this story. I went through the entire chapters twice: once with the audio and once without in order to validate the minor errors I heard during the read-aloud. Though some of the wordings come across as superfluous and occasionally awkward, I must commend your writing abilities! I look forward to more chapters. Cheers!
This is an amazing story and I found it very much interesting to read. The characters were well designed and I very much got enchanted. I have actually read this book up to the last chapter and in my opinion, this book is great, truly great. I hope it gets the attention that it deserves.
This is refreshing to read a book like this in WN. I'm sure the author really put her heart into writing this. Good work! And good job with the Character Development so far. We will probably see the Chacha with Death soon too. JK
This is a very interesting book. I really enjoyed it and enjoyed reading the chapters. I hope the author continues to write this book and I look forward to it!
A good novel, from the construction of dialogues to the chapters of the desire to find out what will happen next, an unusual view of death is also addictive
Really good so far! Death is an interesting character. I like the idea that everyone sees something different when they look at him. Evageline is still a bit of a mystery to me, but that just means I have to keep reading to figure her out. Keep up the good work author!
5/5 very good story, i like to see when characters are well exploited, you know what you do and it seen in the development. Evangelyne is very well written, rare to see this kind of aspect