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摘要
Henry was a young boy who was inspired by his Dad bed time stories to play VRMMORPG, but he could not get his own helmet cause his Mom hate's videogames.
However Henry was given scholarship to Haron college where he meet an old time friend which is a famous player in VRMMORPG.
She introduced him to a Crystal union where they gave him one of their helmet for free.
Unknown to Henry he was already destined to prevent an upcoming destruction that will kill over 50 million player both in VRMMOROG and in the real world.
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This is my first book, just decided to give a review on it! i know it might look somehow but I had to rate it 5 star because it is going to be a fire book.
the writing quality and grammar are serious turn offs. i am really interested in the story but being constantly knocked out of the flow while reading from bad grammar is jarring.
love this book it nice and we'll writing I will love to read more of it update me when you start writing more👍👍
Wow, an amazing book nonetheless! I am hooked on the first chapter. I would like to binge-read it later on......with a captivating story, I am sure it will be a success! Kudos! Looking forward in the future!
I love the cover, the idea is interesting, and the writing is neat and easy to read. But somehow it seems like the story is less interesting maybe because, in the early chapters, it tells too many general things that don't seem right to be explained in detail. it makes readers reluctant to see the next chapter. My suggestion is maybe you can add a hook in the early chapters so that readers are more interested in reading it. Keep up the good work author.
Love the plot, it's amazing. The structure and improvement is good too. The writing is lovely, simple to comprehend.It's perfect.
Wow! What a fire book, the plots are well-written and it has lots of potentials. I can't wiat for more chapters.
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