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"Every day is so annoying and tiring. Just working, eating, and pooping. I rarely get any peace of mind." Rain grumbled.
"I want some rest and go on vacation. It's good I am going on vacation tomorrow.
Goodbye to annoying work for a few days," he cheered.
As he was crossing the road, he saw a truck coming towards him.
"Looks like, my life suc--"
Whether gratifying or pathetic, almost the next moment, he got crushed by the truck, died, and transmigrated into the world of the game "Saga of the Magical Knight" as a mid-tier villain, Rain Holmes.
"Welcome to the fantasy world, I guess."
Fortunately, the system was there to help him.
[Host should choose one choice among the following three choices.]
| 1. Supporting Character |
| 2. Villain |
| 3. Extra Character |
"Supporting Character sucks, and being a villain is tiring and risky.
I choose to be an extra character." Rain answered.
[Okay.]
'Who cares about that protagonist and heroines, I rather go on vacation and live a free life.' Rain scoffed.
He didn't care about the plot, he wanted [vacation].
However, soon he realized it won't be as easy as he thought.
"Hey, runaway Young master, spar with me!" The musclehead Villain roared.
"Rain, you are only my friend, I won't let other bitches have you." One of the heroines declared.
"But didn't he say he love me?" A mysterious beauty appeared.
"Is getting vacation that hard?" Rain said in an exhausted tone.
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As my novel is getting so much attention. I think it's time for another mandatory author review. As the story is approaching 100 chapters let me tell you some things. -Mc at first will be little emotional after thinking about some things, however he won't be in later plot. -There will be some slice of life chapters between novel. -System might sound sentinel. However it's different. It won't interfere in the story much. -Romance won't be introduced in first volume however some hints will be dropped. -There will be much of world building information so you can skip it if you won't and read it after some time when you feel it. I have made separate chapters for them. -If you forgot some stuff, Read the auxiliary chapters. You will find it. -Still you feel to suggest something, feel free to do so.
Well, the story has a rocky start until chapter 10 where it has got better from time to time, I like the [Mark's pov] chapters where you get a different taste from the usual introvert mc. Speaking of mc, he isn't quite as bad as the more he gets fleshed out in a later chapter. The story is relatively slow-paced so it may not suit some. The system is well-describe? As it get strained to read at PC, the detail of the character quite informative is what I can say. A solid story 6.5/10
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This was very nice novel , I quite like it, and MC is also smart not dense or dumb.
The story was very enjoyable. I just binge-read the entire thing. But as far as a review goes, it doesn't leave a strong impression on me. It's kinda meh. From the MC's parents to his fiance and sister, the characters feel a bit shallow and very one-dimensional. The story tries to explain this but fails to convince you. All in all a good read. Good luck to the author.👍
Author-nim I am dying without the sweet nectar that is this work!! I hope you come back soon and that Emma and kaya have a complete regret arc and have some not-so-happy endings.
Beginning of the story was great, but it starts falling off when he's on the island. While I liked the chapters of him exploring the island, it seemed a little drawn out to me at times. Also not a fan of sentient systems, especially if it has an attitude and literally shocks the mc if it doesnt like what hes saying or doing. Then there is his streaming thing, I know he came from a super rich and influential family, but he's cut them off. I don't really get why he's gotten so popular and influential only by streaming, especially in the academy, when he only streams at most 2 hours a week. But that's just me and I kept reading... until the second volume where the author keeps changing pov of characters constantly, sometimes repeating the same events several times but from the drawn out perspective of several different characters and how they each experienced the repeated scene. Too many repeats, and too many pov's for me.
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author mc needs more screen time bro why are other characters getting more chapters than him man (it seems that way to me) and these excesively unnecessary discriptions and redundant dialogues in the couple chapters before and including chp 113 is making a tad bit boring and a chore to read THIS IS MY OPINION AND I ACTUALLY LIKE THE BOOK
Man I really like this novel.I hope the author keeps this novel updated regularly.
a wonderful story ...the mc is not a simp... interactions are good...the only problem is that increase rin pov more cause it started to look like his chapter just acted as a summary or report of sorts about what he was doing .. anyways a good novel .. update soon .
man i think the author is dead. It has been f**king 1 year since last upload. i have lost all hope of getting new chapters. man and i thought i was a lazy slack
Amazing novel in my opinion. Right now I do not have the time to write a long review so that's it.
I’m really enjoying the story so far I’ve been using the Webnovel app to listen to novels but I have noticed that the quality of writing more specifically some of the sentences have grammar issues I haven’t notice this till now so I’m not sure if it’s just from chapter 55 to chapter 57(which is where I’m currently at) just a suggestion to go back and maybe use grammerly or something to improve the wording
tbh it had a slow start but got much better couple chapters in and i'm loving the MC please continue author anyways great work 10/10 a great find indeed
I think this is good but some problems I have are with the writing like grammar structure or just the use of words that would make sense but are amateurish. And, the other problem I have are the constant note from the author during the story I mean I don’t hate it but it ruins the immersion that I’m feeling. Overall: I would recommend, it will capture you with it’s drama and story but the writing as well as the constant note’s can be a little off putting. Improvements for Author: 1. Author please next time try not to add too much notes it ruins the connection and immersion people feel with the story 2. Maybe get an editor because while it is readable it be wayy better if you had someone to edit it.
The plot is new and although there are few of such type, but none comes close to this one, you won't regret reading it.
Hey Author! I started reading your novel though I haven't finished it. It's great! I would love to have a discussion with you[img=recommend]
I liked everything about this novel except for the short chapters