摘要
On his deathbed, Dennis, a genius without peer, provoked the wrath of celestial beings. As punishment, he was reborn into the cultivation simulation he masterminded. Bound by a potent curse with the power to obliterate the heavens, he grapples with challenges in this familiar yet alien realm. Will he ascend to new heights, or will the weight of his transgressions pull him under? Embark on a journey where past choices cast long, unpredictable shadows.
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Make sure to check out the Aux chapter for Ai character art. (will change to real art once I can afford it)
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1 chapter per day minimum.
1 Bonus Chapter = 300 PS (in a week)
1 Bonus Chapter = 250 Collections
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This novel has no Yuri, no Yaoi, no NTR and no rape. (and it will stay that way)
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Give more chapters, or my navy seal seal will be sent to beat you up till you do! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
RTX Spooderman here swinging at ya with another novel review. It's an intriguing novel that I wish I had more time to read. If the author ever stops writing it I will web them to their desk until they continue!
Why did I have to discover this novel so early?! Such a diamond - a diamond that hasn’t been fully discovered… loving the novel so far!
Overall a good novel, I can't find any issues with it, the story's compelling, and I'm interested in what will happen next. It's still early into the novel but it seems to be on its way to success as long as the quality doesn't drop.
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I like it so far, I'm intrigued by what the author wants to do with this world they're trying to create. I already have some theories but it might be too soon to say.
The novel is good and I can see it going places. The writing is perfect IMO and I like the MC so far. I decided to let the chapters stack up so I could binge read it.
Shameless Author here with the classic 5* (Because I don't hate myself like some seem to) Writing Quality: I am still new to writing so my quality might not be 100% consistent but there shouldn't be any spelling mistakes or many grammatical errors. (English is my 4th language) Stability of Updates: 1 Chapter per day for now but once contracted it will jump to 2. Story Development: The entire first arc is currently planned however it will be quite dark and the MC will suffer a bit but things will get better for him. Character Design: For now the only recurring character is going to be the MC. He will be ruthless and bloodthirsty. (pun intended) He will grow as a character throughout the first arc and only become or at least start to become the true him towards the end of it. World Background: This part I want to avoid talking about as I can't stop myself from spoiling some cool things coming but it won't be entirely the classic cultivation world/universe you all know and love.