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摘要
Born in an unusual way the mc Soren user of the flames that only 2 other people ever wielded travels worlds to find the one who gave him not only life but also love in the form of fire.
Multiverse
Characters may be different or stronger than original.
MC WILL BE OP and will get stronger
Harem but no lemon
Give me tips this is my first time writing but don’t be stupid about it.
Enjoy
Disclaimer:I do not own anything other than my mc the rest belong to there rightful owners
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I usually don't write reviews this early but so far just from the first three chapters this is a very good concept and I hope to see more.
I don't like the fact that after showing so much interaction with his mother, Irene died and he, killed her himself and it came suddenly too, like give it a dark or tragic tag or at least write something in the synopsis I just read some days ago in research that what you read, listen to etc affects your worldview perspective so trying to be positive I don't like this is kind of surprises and I just don't like Irene died and mostly how she died
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