摘要
Lin Dong, who has mastered both the divine medical arts and martial arts, has traveled from the mountains to the city.
With divine medical arts in his left hand and unbeatable martial arts in his right, he roams freely in the city.
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At certain places it creates confusion in the use of the names of the characters. some times first name is used and at other times surname is used. At times gender usage of he for she etc. makes it a little difficult to immediately connect to the said character.
overall good the only downside is the MC character is to green, """if you respect me i respect you""" but the MC don't know this word........
I love this story. I recently started reading it. I'm only on chapter 20 (l still have long to go) but I'm already addicted to it. As an author myself, this book has been as inspiration. Thanks a lot author. Keep it up
Main character is good but why is he surrounded by thirsty women right from the start? It’s disgusting how they are portrayed to just throw themselves at him. And this Bai Jue chick is the worst. She really suits the profession she was forced into. I’ve read the free chapters and don’t find it worth continuing.
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