/ Fantasy / Unknown Devil (dropped)
摘要
Aldwyn found himself awakening with no memory of his previous life. The world that he found himself in was unfamiliar to him. Was he from Nyrmoria or did he arrive from an alternative world? That was the answer he was trying to find.
Searching for his past, he learns more about this "new" world and discovers many mysteries. Is he ever going to find out who he really is? We shall see.
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Please forgive me if there are a few gramma mistakes from time to time. English is not my native language. :D
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Besides, this is the first story I've ever written. I hope you'll enjoy it, I definitely have a lot of plans for it :)
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
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- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Let's go 100 Ch.🔥I specifically waited until the 100th chapter before writing a review. I really like the novel so far. I like the characters, the world, the fights and I love the fact that it can be extremely dark. I also like the fact that everything is explained with a lot of detail. Of course, one or two things could be improved, such as the power system. I would have liked a bit more information on that, but I'm sure it will come. Keep going!🙂↕️
A quick note to everyone who has read this story up to this point! I have decided to stop writing this story for several reasons. The main reason is that I wasn't happy with it anymore and I didn't know where I wanted to go with it. So that means you can consider this story as unfinished. I will come back and write something new, but it will take some time until I have the concept etc. ready. But I'm quite enthusiastic, so stay tuned 🙏🏻 And thanks for the support on this story! I can promise my next one will be better.
I like the story so far. You're slowly building a world and trying to add a certain level of detail. I also really like Aldwyn as a Mc. I really hope there's gonna be a good side character. Otherwise keep up the good work, looking forward for the next chapters🔥