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Under the Deep Vast Sea

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作者: Alex0024

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She was in love for him the first time his eyes glance at her way. Like a butterfly intoxicated by the scent of him, she flutters her way into his life and become his wife.

But he hasn't even love her.

He thought she was just a necessary woman in order to appease his parents and grandparents. That is what she all means to him.

She was all alone, no one in her family and only the love she pours for him became her reason to live.

But can she do it forever?

Won't she be swallowed by the deep raging sea storm and drown in her own sorrow and sadness?

Will loving him from afar sated her raging desire of love for him? Or should she left and start a new life again?

Without him?

Find out how a butterfly turns into a full fledged eagle, ready to flee for her own fate. Without the sea holding her back and leave the man whom she promises her life on.

Or would she?

*This is my first book here in Web novel although I have wrote some stories in Wattpad before, this is a whole new world fro me. Please do guide me and also love the story I created here. Thank you so much!!! Cover's not mine*

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Leahquiatzon

This story really has a potential Aside from the fact that it is heart breaking that it can really trigger your emotions. This is actually the first time I enjoyed reading story with a weak Female lead maybe because her character was really portrayed well with a very strong reason to make her end up in such a sorry everything is just reasonable that you can't hate her but pity her. I am also touched that she has a very caring in-laws. And as of now I'm still confused who I want to ship with her. Since both are just acting b*stards one being a tsundere and the second not thinking the consequences of his actions to the female lead. It must be nice seeing her character develop slowly to be strong before turning to her love affairs after all she has internal struggles and personal issues and it's a point that she has friends to lean on. There also missed details in the story that's making me confused though and I hope for more chapters to clear those loopholes...

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Melody246

Well I like the plot of the story....and the characters..but I don't know What's wrong with the female lead....what the hell is she enduring all the rudeness and neglect of her trash husband....she should just leave him..he already had given enough chances....he just doesn't deserve her...she should really stop fooling around...and accept that he doesn't care for her at all...and should end the relationship andove on with her life....

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Leahquiatzon

I'll rate it 5 stars since I enjoy the story so far. But I want to note that there are some misspelling and minor grammatical errors but I believe author has a potential to develop her writing skills in due time. It's a job well done to portray a pitiful wife who lost her baby and hated by the husband. On the other hand the sudden change of husband's behavior on the few chapters seems rush...

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leovenjaye

I am giving a definite 5 shining stars to this awesome jewel..though i haven't read this yet,i have an inkling feeling that i am going to enjoy reading this amazing work of art..hopeful for this to turn out right..dear author just keep the ball rolling...🤗🤗🤗

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Lady_Ale

The story is really different and good and interesting too . The thing is I'm forgetting what happened in the previous chapters whenever you update 😅🙊 So I re-read the old chapter and then read new chapter 😂 I can understand that you are busy and not able to write . I'll be waiting for ur next chapters hope you update whenever u are free ❤ Keep writing 💯

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LuxSw
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Love the book hope for regular updates soon :D 🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💘💝💖💓💞💕💘💝💓💞💕💘💝💖💗💓💞💕

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Syriacus

A very good book ..from the story , characters A good writing style ...can't wait for the upcoming chapters anyway keep up the good work ...fighting !!!

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devils_girl

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作者 Alex0024