/ Anime & Comics / Uchiha patriarch
摘要
A normal person overnight became the last patriarch of the Uchiha clan.
Will it change things?
Of course, for better or for worse.
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it's interesting, but the writing style is very fixed and direct, it seems like a bunch of robots talking, for example, the conversation with shisui was very simple and direct, there were no changes of expressions or even disagreement, he just listened and agreed, what even with the meeting with Danzo and Homura, they said something, the mc refuted it and they changed the subject as simple as that, without any hole dug, wordplay or direct disagreement, politicians don't work like that, anyway... everything is very direct, when there is dialogs only the words without ambiance are done, when there are no dialogues, only a quick summary is made.
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write more you did pretty good..........