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摘要
A new OC Uchiha comes into Naruto Universum a couple of years before Naruto's birth. Wait and see what can a determined and a little crazy Uchiha do to this world.
Hello to you all! This story will not start like many others on this site, there won't be a 2-year-old child with rinnegan fighting on par with elite ninjas, no more "I have 2 bijuus sealed inside. Fear me!". Only good and hard work will get you far in this world. You can find more info in the "Introduction" chapter.
Image for this novel was taken from Freepik.com (Woman photo created by javi_indy - www.freepik.com) with a little red edit from my side, if you Mr. javi_indy want me to change it, just inform me :-).
And for all of you my dear readers, if you didn't know - Naruto's Universum is a property of Masashi Kishimoto, I'm not taking any risks :-)
P.S. I'm trying my best, but I am NOT a native English speaker. If you can find ANY mistakes on my part please inform me :-).
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Good story, I love it not only is it enjouable to read, It also sometimes made me smile at some comedy scenes, I loved your Idea on the Female Protagonist, I think it is a good idea and unique so keep it up. Plus support.
A very good story i love it :) plz don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!! .................................................................................................................................................................... ............ .........
The story was really good it is worth the read. HOWEVER, to me this novel has been ruined. The author introduces a reincarnation type figure that utterly destroys everything built/in the story. To me he ruins everything. As soon as he shows up, around that time. It just gradually starts going downhill. I mean everything the author justifies his reasons is the mc is too op etc etc. However, compared to the rest she rly isn't. She doesn't even have ems and I can think of tons of ppl that could destroy her. Another thing for me is I feel that reincarnation dude is just to put everything so it somewhat follows canon in some way. Like the mc makes changes and that other guy makes the "changes" irrelevant and makes it follow back to canon. Granted it happens in different ways. However, at the core it is what he is doing. Overall, im utterly disappointed that a great fanfic to me was ruined by this. Gl to author for future stories.
Nice story but author is trying too hard not make OP MC which bugs me the most! As you see MC has natural talent in learning and can use Fujin jutsu but never uses it and while fighting she can use five element jutsu but only uses her MS which makes her blind.... So much for making M.C nerf. It's like author gave most powerful tool to MC but MC never tried to learn or try to gain insight!!! Which frustrates me to no end.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Nerfing the main character constantly is the authors favorite pass time At some point he even seals permanently 25% of the chakra of the mc, so don't expect it to get better with time
I'm really enjoying this story but something is really bugging me. Most of the story I've read thus far seems like a rewrite of a gamer story I read on ff.net. I'm not sure if it moves away from that path as there are minor differences that seem to be building up but it doesn't take away from this sense of deja vu. Other than that this is probably one of the most well written stories I've found on webnovel.
this story makes me happy. and sad. and angry. and fuzzy. if you don't hate a certain group of characters by the end of reading this I'd call you weird. if you don't love another group I'd call you crazy. and the world well it's Naruto. a well thought out Naruto. just read it. it's some hours of your life you will never want back and will do so again in a heartbeat.
so from my reading it works better than most naruto fanfictions. I enjoy it quite well. other ones usually point out the bad spots in the 3rd hokage although he did do bad things this plays his character out better. which I enjoy that.
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again author San great going. This is the most realistic Naruto fanfiction I know . truthfully I regret that it was too little Yuri moment in that chapter😔 . And there is a scene of her crying every 3 4 chapters but that's for character development so I understand . And I hope her love interest won't be like a god from another world or op reincarnator . u know there are already many sob past virgin powerful perverted virgin male already there in naruto😚
author San I like this novel. your writing style is really good. I am enjoying the story and well there is many r*** part but maybe it's a girls pov therefore it's like that . well this is great novel read it and u will understand 😁😁😁
When do you like upload, so I can read, and also this is so good, it makes me so impatient to wait, and I'm just like trying to read other naruto fanfics to try and wait for an update.
I love this fanfiction so much. the writing, the story, the background, and of course the romance. but if there's one thing I dislike about it, it's that it doesn't update too frequently which makes me sad.
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I didn't start yet but that synopsis alone got me happy most stories are extremely rushed. when if they are stretched can make more stones .
Simplemente una historia increible y una verdadera lastima que no este serialisado en formato manga/anime xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Muy buena, gracias por los capítulos y espero como fan que no dejes de publicar, esta muy entretenida nada que ver como la mayoría de otros fanfic
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Absolutely brilliant. Keep writing more chapter's. The character is really well written and the story is good. Please don't stop this halfway.
Wait the Mc and the Mc of the Fan-fiction of - Naruto: Spring's Eyes and this fan-fic kinda gave me the same vibe and the author of that fan fic also said in his introduction that his MC will gonna progress in strength through hard-work, talent and opportunity. This novel however dont have talent but is equalling it throughh hard work. Is the author the same person? And the author - OceanoTurtle also have reviewed this fanfiction with 5 stars just yesterday! Are they the same author?😂 I just got the same vibe between the two and both of them I liked reading.