摘要
When a orphan is thrown into the world of supernatural. It changes the fate of the world.
An alternative Twilight Universe.
This is my first time writing. Even if the story gets messed up. I will still finish this fanfiction. So, there will be many mistakes. And English is 2nd Language.
My one humble request is please leave a review.
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Decide if it's 1st or 3rd person, it feels like I'm reading someone's mind with schizophrenia... joe did this, joe do that, joe thought about it. DECIDE THE MAIN POV!!!
It s a good story , i hope you update more chapter in the future and don t drop like the other author . Good luck with th story 👍 👍👍👍😸
one of the most dificult fic to read becouse of the grammar... It just give you a headache. It changes the perspective so much¡!!!!!!……………........
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Bad writing. Just dialogue. Interesting plot but way too hard to read. Zero descriptive writing. Not one scene is described not one. Would give it a 1 out of five but felt too bad to
really enjoying this so far and it is a good novel but I advise u to read over or get someone who's first language is English to check for the little mistakes other then that it's good.
havent read it yet, but from personal experience i know that a good review can greatly motivate one into writing the story, so good luck author.