/ Anime & Comics / Transmigrated in Rent A Girlfriend But Why Am I A Girl?[GL]
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A gym-obsessed 18-year-old boy was walking down the street, his mind filled with thoughts of his next workout. Suddenly, a truck barreled towards him, giving him no time to react. As the impact hit, he found himself sprawled on the pavement, pain surging through his body. With his vision blurring and consciousness fading, he muttered, "Damn, because I've been obsessed with the gym, I didn't try dating at all. If there's a next life, I would date all the girls I want."
When he opened his eyes again, he found himself in an unfamiliar room. Confusion washed over him as he struggled to make sense of his surroundings. "Why am I still alive?" he wondered aloud. Feeling disoriented, he stumbled towards a mirror hanging on the wall.
As his reflection came into view, his heart skipped a beat. Staring back at him was not his own face, but that of a beautiful girl. Panic and disbelief set in as he exclaimed, "What the f*ck? Why am I a girl?"
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Please note thati don't own rent a girlfriend it belong to the goat Miyajima-sensei thank you for bringiing us this master piece also this is an Alternative universe and it won't follow the same route as the original manga and anime
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The other guy isn't lying. The idea of the story is good but it's plot is all over the place, somethings are not made clear, some are just skipped, the reactions and dialogues are very weird....... It could be a masterpiece but author needs to work on the flow of the story and polish it!
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The story is all over the place and is incoherent. It doesnt make much sense. Example: The character was previously at school, then left because the day was over. She got home and changed clothes an everything. A few paragraphs down shes magically back at school and the bell rings for her to attend her second class of the day… it seems as if it was written by an AI as well, so its mostly fluff and useless descriptors for entire paragraphs. Dissapointing