摘要
David thought he would live a normal life when he awakened the banking system at the age of 18.
However, fate seemed to have something else in store for him as his life turned upside down when following the death of one of his loyal client, a shiny window popped up in front of him.
[Regretfully! You lost one of your clients today. However, the Bank of Eternal Origin can never suffer a loss.
Even if he died, the client will have to pay back somehow, therefore his soul was captured. You now have the following options, keep in mind that you can only choose one.
1 - Extract Client's Crystallion of Life (Money Talks, Grade - Uncommon)
2 - Extract Bryan's memories from his birth till his death.
3 - Any item that client owned in his lifetime.
4- Do Nothing, let the compound interest do its thing and decide again when the Client dies in his next life.
Please note as capturing the soul and imprisoning it requires a large amount of mana because of which you only have two hours left to make a choice.]
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New reader here. The concept is good and overall story flow is decent. The only thing I'd say is work on those chapter titles mate XD. I like that it doesn't take itself to seriously though too many edgy stories out there (Including mine haha). I definitely see potential though good going. Hope it does well!
worth a read.........................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm going to give it a five star rating because the overall story development is good, and it has nice pacing with an intriguing concept.
Nice work author i wasn't expecting the story to develop so smoothly, you got me hooked.
Chapters one through about eighty were amazing. I was really enjoying the story's novel ideas. Lots of fun. However, after about chapter one hundred, it fell way off, and I didn't even bother finishing it.
giving five stars because of only one reason the authors update regularly... I am tired of getting one chapter a day.. i want more
Very unique premise and interesting MC. The author uses a generic murim world and inserts his own new idea into it, making it an interesting novel which is very enjoyable. I felt my expectations were exceeded several times and the story did not bore me. It is written well and I am curious to see how it will continue from here
The concept is a bit new and intriguing. The story is decent and the character development is pretty good. It was a good read, waiting for more chapters!!
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
The story has a nice pacing and it's interesting to read. I like the concept of the story a lot and the world building is pretty solid. Good Work!