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Reincarnated due to the interference of fate, Mike tries to survive in a world of magic and monsters.
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Michael Rasmussen, a.k.a. Mike, lived an ordinary and uneventful life, until he was killed in an accident. Surprisingly, or perhaps as expected, he found himself face to face with a goddess of reincarnation.
Due to the unusual aspects of his death, Mike could no longer be reborn in his own world. So, he ended up in a fantasy realm of magic, monsters, and a video game-like skill system.
Exciting as this new life was to a long time fantasy fan, his arrival has set many things in motion. His very presence is warping the destiny of the entire world and disrupting the path laid out by the world's divinities.
Trapped in a growing web of competing powers who take note of his actions, Mike can only depend on his own strength. He must fight for his place in this world or risk becoming a victim to their machinations.
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This is a novel I am writing for fun and practice. Its also the first I've posted online. I know it will probably be a bit rough, but I thank you in advance for giving it a chance.
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This novel is unjustly buried under 150 of ****ty but rated novels in ranking. I am personally offended, because it took me quite some time to step above my pride and skrolling down through row of novels (when even reading title makes you puke and your eyes closing in unavoidable facepalm). I can swear, I will vote it until it will make into top 50 at least. Why the F I have to dig like a fucking depth digger to find a decent novel while ****tiest ones floating in top 20? this ranking is totally rigged at some point. TL DR:10\10 boys.
Kudos to the author. Its a great novel. Just started reading the other day and caught up to the latest update. Really got me hooked. Plot and sequence are good. The characters and sub-plots are nicely strewn.
I'm pretty mad, I don't now why this novel isn't rated, for God's sake!! The novel is good, yeah maybe the mc is a bit op and has a cheat tha justifies the plot armor but!! The quality of the writing is good!! The author gives a lot of details but its written in a way that doesn't overwhelm you! Whatever!! Just read the novel!!
This story has a bunch of potential. I hope the author does not drop this, and I hope the author is able to add multiple realms, or other universes. I hope this book achieves a 1000+ chapters.
I love the Background of the Story, the level up system is cool and the skill are ok. However the MC.. the main kill the story, he is so stup!d, he never train or do some plaining he just exist to use plot armor. The hole fact that after chapter 40 he always do thing to blow the minds of others just because he doesnt have common sense of this new world is DUMB.
Author improves imensly as goes on. Each character that Mc meets is unique and fleshed out with quirky personalities and their own agendas. A bit too much politics for my taste, but only a bit. Also I find Sara annoying and kind of useless. Mc grows a lot magically wich is fun to watch. Top 3 original. Plots are well thought out. After editing this is publishing quality, so get it wile you can!
It is an awfully good written story. That is certain. I’d recommend it for the well written dialogue and great setting. Yes, it is one of the few webnovel on this site that I’d recommend; But it is utterly and I mean devastatingly infuriating to see Mike the Protagonist go through his adventure. His idiocy or just utter stupidity couldn’t be more. The mental strength required to not scream at my phone for minutes on end is baffling. Yes. I see the irony in being that invested in a story. Getting back on topic, no sense of self or rational thought can be fun for a while, but a whole story with a protagonist that could be replaced with a stone is just senseless. There are moments of decision making and hard choices, but mostly he’s just drifting along for the ride. In the end I’m questioning this story. Although we see him use his past knowledge in certain ways. His understanding vanishes on most other topics. Thinking about certain tropes and clichés in his mind is refreshing, but only if he also acts on them and brings a new spin on them. Don’t get me wrong; they have a certain charm to them, but that is only the case, if you use them in new exciting ways. To sum things up, I agree that the author put his heart into creating it and it is a good story. That is, if it were published a decade ago. This has been written in this exact style for years on end; hundreds of them are on this platform. A bit more creativity on the character and story development departments would be nice. Finally, I can’t see myself enjoying the same nonsense of jumbled mess further down the road, even if it is a well written piece of literature. P.S.: I don’t count myself as a perfectly fine critic. This review was just because of my frustrations reading this book.
So I've more or less read that from chapters 1 till 200ish in a couple of days that was one of the best books I've read in quite a while definitely worth a read.
A by-the-book isekai fantasy with a little humor tossed in with NO HAREM. I love it.........................................................
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I really enjoy the story it's been a while since I could find a good skill based system story that isn't cliche has good grammar and a fun world to explore with a likeable main character, I plan to follow this novel to whatever end you bring it. P.s. is the poison resistance skill ruining alcohol going to be a running joke because my current favorite is him shaking his fist at the sky due to the skill leveling up.
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Nice read, so far the novel is pretty good, i cant say about gramatical errors because im not native in english but i liked what i read. Try it xD
One of my all time favorites. The rare OP MC who remains likeable and the story exciting. World building is top notch too. Wish it updated more often, but you can’t force creativity, so I understand.
An excellent novel that has a standard of writing well above the average works on this site. The only reason I gave it a 4/5 is due to the fairly common missing word or misspellings that you will see in most unedited works. The chapters are updated slowly but it’s well worth the wait even though I only spent about 3 days of reading to read all available 360 chapters (3years of work). There are some character choices that I don’t love, but within the more recent chapters (past 300) there is a better explanation for why things are happening the way they are even though I still have so many more questions I am dying to know the answers to. I greatly appreciate having access to a great new author especially when the work is completely free. Keep up the good work!
First I will go into the mechanics of the story, mainly focusing on the weak points of character design and the stability of updates. Now then; this is one of the best novels on the website. I am not exaggerating. This is an incredible story. However, some things are not perfect, namely the stability of updates and some of the character designs. Other than that it is extremely well written. If you are tired of RPG Isekai worlds with systems, where the main character is OP from the start, then this is for you. It is a refreshing telling with tropes. But the greatest tools within this story are the different perspectives and the foreshadowing. These really set it apart from other novels. Too many novels that I have read only focus on where the protagonist is, and not taking time shine light on factions or other individuals. The only thing that I dislike is how some of the characters began - some had a weak start but they have grown. As well, the stability of updates has dropped, but I think it is acceptable as Mobius still puts out 1-2 chapters per month. Recently Mobius has had a child, within the last two years I believe, so I think that this is excellent, but not perfect. But I understand his lessened stability, and so I am very grateful he is still continuing this series. Some of the characters seem to be one-note at first, but they have grown after time. Some characters which I would have liked to have read more of have not been dug into as much, but hopefully he will be going back over them. I will be going into spoilers now, so be warned. SPOILERS SPOILERS Some people have complained about the protagonist being stupid, which is fair that he has had almost no forethought during his journey, but I think that is part of his journey, which is great considering how he does gain powers and go through levels quickly. This is part of the character development the MC must go through. Most isekai protagonists have battles of power, which is moot since they are so overpowered. Right now there is a battle within the MC concerning his mind/soul/spirit. It has been done well so far. I would have liked to have seen more from his characters, especially the main cast of characters. This includes such things as them establishing their likes and dislikes, their interactions during meals, and maybe see some downtime for all of them. I would like to see one main character, Lily, where she does work on her alchemy or something. Maybe Sera, another main character, could be seen working on her archery. Sera could then compare her current self to how much she's grown, noting how much easier it is to pull back the bow and aim. Maybe a flashback could occur for Tal, and she thinks back on how she met one of her spirits. This would be really good. And now I will be going into my theories on how the story will progress. These are theories that I have, and will probably be wrong. But I will use specific evidence from certain chapters. These will be major, major spoilers, so be warned. SUPER SPOILERS SUPER SPOILERS One, I think that Mike, the MC, was chosen by the Ancient Ones, and that the Ancient Ones sent the string of Fate to him to push him to the new world. My evidence for this are: there is no such thing as a free lunch, the Ancient One put him at a specific time, place and world, out of all of the infinite possibilities from uncountable realms, and there were too many coincidences around his summoning. One, there is no free lunch. So the Ancient One posed himself as a kind Samaritan, but I think that He, the Giant Space-Whale, planned it. There are infinite universes, and he put Mike in a world which was going to be destroyed soon, and a world in which the gods had already requested help from the Ancient Ones. I think that Mike is the help from the Ancient Ones. The Ancient Ones are sick of cleaning up the messes of the gods and their enemies. They aren't their nannies. So I think that the Ancient One sent Mike so that he could help the world in his own way, as he is trying to be impartial, since Mike is free from fate, and could save the world or lead it to its destruction. Also, when Mike was summoned, he was summoned near a predatory dinosaur monster, and so he ran away from it, toward a knight squadron. This squadron then repelled the beast, moving towards their camp. But they were ambushed by enemies, and were only saved by the same dinosaur monster which had chased Mike, and then tracked after him. This ended up saving most of the squad. Also, while one of the knights was on his deathbed, Mike saved him using healing magic, which he didn't know how to do. Mike even comments in a later chapter that he doesn't know why he didn't just transfer mana when he tried to heal these knights. Morris, one of the knights he saves, happens to be the son of one of the greatest strategists of the day. The injuries that Morris received force him to travel elsewhere. This leads Mike to end up acquiring the 'Hero' title. All of these things can not be coincidence. I think the Ancient One influenced these events, and chose a spot where Mike could change the outcome of the world's destiny. Thank you for reading. And Mobius if you read this, don't try to change the stuff you're doing.
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Honestly one of the best novels on this site - it has everything - epic battles, a kick-ass MC, who very fast becomes OP, but still has more powerfull enemies, a good sense of humor, good worldbuilding, fleshed out side characters... I'm quite amazed that is not in top 10 of this site
Great novel, i only found it thanks to lucky and curiosity, yet became hooked, sadly its rankings are too low compared to the quality of the work, hidden gem.
I've been reading this book for a while now, and till this day I'm glad I picked it up. It's an interesting take on a isekai like story. A unique take at that. It's fun to read, not too many characters, no obnoxious face slapping (though a little), and consistent protagonist growth. The only problem I have with it is it's fight usually involve a lot of 'dues ex machina'. Though considering he's supposed to be the prophesied "hero", I am let it slide
Shameless self-promotion! Also, I'm interested in seeing how many of these things are necessary to give a rating on the front page.