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摘要
if someone there is strongest then it's none other then hulk
hulk smash!!...
hulk strong!!..
I loved two characters from both dc comics and marvel comics but also hated them because they never tried to train there powers and reach full potential, and those two are hulk and superman.
before I knew anything I was already .....
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Shameless author here 😂😂😂😂 giving myself 5 star rating, my dialogues are very bad but I will try to improve my dialogues and let's see how my story goes 😂😂😂
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Just random advice from random guy You can make it like this: "Dialogue" 'Thought' Add more work onto the dialogue, its messed up Pretty nice idea actually