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Trying to improve my writing, this story would follow different setups from slice of life to action and many more feel free to comment on what needs to be improved and the like thanks!
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this novel is very good, but the author introduced many characters from different anime in a few chapters and that worries me a lot. I've seen more than one FF dropped because the author was unable to develop the story and ended up getting lost with the number of characters. This is actually a very common mistake made by beginning authors in crossovers.
oh I loved the fic the plot the development that it has I hope to read more I just have to wait well I just hope it does not fall and I wish you the best author very good work 😃
I can confidently say that when it comes to a slice of life multi-crossover story, this fanfic is one of, if not the best. Unlike most of the authors here in Webnovel, this story actually have good grammar. Not too sure about the update stability, I'm used to the very long update period in FFN so this is not really a problem in my case but since Webnovel authors only write short chapters I was expecting this to be a daily update (Not really complaining btw). The story development in my opinion is what separates this story from the other multi-crossover slice of life fanfics. It actually shows the development of each characters. Nothing major yet mind you, but the interaction between the characters feels more genuine and realistic. I heard the others complaining about the MC being a beta, but in my eyes he's realistic than the rest. He's thinking things through and is not a horndog. MC doesn't feel like a Gary Stu or at least not yet (if the author somehow made a mistake). I don't even get why MC was labeled as a beta anyways, he wasn't even whipped to submission. I somehow feel like the word beta is misused these days. Just because the MC is not acting like horndog and is not very aggressive towards getting harem and having s*x makes people label those kind of MC as a beta. The other MC's of these genre are literally just trying to get girls, increase their harem, get ridiculously OP through their system cheat, get girls again, rinse and repeat. No developments whatsoever. This one is a gem buried underneath the pile of trashes in this platform. I hope the author continue trying to improve this gem and don't get discouraged from the reviews and comments of the dumb masses. This story is good and the author should keep up the great work. ...Also additional points cause I like Horimiya
Looking at the pace it is going, I can say that it can that this harem fanfic can easily enter my top 10 list. The romance is good, nothing I saw was forced, the MC knows when draw a line between a stranger and friends, he is not behaving like a retard nor a stupid hormonal teenager or a pussy ...so yeah...I enjoyed reading it.
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Autor-san, you don't have to degrade the entertainment industry just to make MC get rich by plagiarizing from previous life. It was enough to say that he is a genius or something and created great manga to compete with one piece. At most, just come up with an interesting idea for a manga and say that MC wrote it. I'm already a little tired of those fics that make the entertainment industry mysteriously worse than our world, it just doesn't make sense and there's not even a good reason to come up with such a scenario. If you want the MC to make easy money, just take some futuristic technology from the system and sell it. (Sorry for any erros, i used google translator)
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sigue asi amigo espero que sigas de largo con la novel ........................................................................................................
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Horimiya Fanfic. iam in! ..................................................................................................... And i want more of this chapter! keep it up[img=update]
just a fanfic with Japanese protagonist that is a beta and bends like those loose Japanese. ............................................................................
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its a very good fanfic please continue🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
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Well i guess this is for the wallpaper HAHAHAHA!!!!!!.... okokok the story is good....but why just 1 chapter has been release.............for some reason i think the story is dropped.....sorry just joking....right?????
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This is what you expect when open multy crossover slice of life ff. I will say more, this is what you should look for to start your own multy cross sol ff. Without some random op powers at the beginning, understandable mc, slow pace to introduce the world and characters. Pretty lively dialogues. Good writing skills. Good for good starting point Mc: Someone will say that he is beta mc, trash and so on. But i do not see this, i think he is understandable ( he got inserted in the middle of life of another person and with bits of memory and got lost) there are some kind of soul fusion as much as I understand sooo... He is not the J.Bond type, but average person who needs time to gain more confidence, power ect. I hope his powers will develop step by step, not in the one go Pace of the story is good, but even though it is slow there are too much action. author introduced too many characters in just two days so it became confusing. He rushed it too much but it dont feel forced, but natural. BUT in two days. Characters are likeble I hope he will help some of them not to get into trouble and take them for himself Interaction are good Not cringe and embarrassing Mc have some flirting skills I was a little annoyed when kenichi word was added, i feel like it was better not to Dojo from from "tomo chan is a girl" or anything else suited more imao. Good start 5 stars from me. To maybe dropped story HDDDD
Im a simple man, most of us are simple men and women. Hormiya is great, underrated and very funny, you give us what we want.. We stone yo- I mean give you stones......
Just because its a horimiya fanfic, you get all stars