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摘要
Name : Hatake Kakashi
Affiliation: Konoha missing-nin
Apparence: silver hair,black eyes, always wearing a black mask covering half his face, no clan markings
Abilities: Lighting Affinity, White Chakra Sabre, Chunnin Level Skills guarantee, Summons dogs or maybe wolfs,still unsure
Family : Konoha Whte Fang, Hatake Sakumo
Bounty : 5,000 yen. Dead. 10,000 yen. Alive. Growing.
Titles : Konoha Newest Prodigy
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Your story has potential but it's unreadable due to your poor writing. Get yourself someone who could proofread or edit for you and for sure this story will be a great hit. Hope you take my review as a building criticism rather than a malicious one. Good luck with your future and keep doing you.