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摘要
I don’t own anything from One Piece, I am just a fan who has followed the story for a long time…
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What happens when a person dies and loses part of his memories. Only to wake up one day in the world of One Piece? They do what any sane person would do… Train to become strong and set out on an adventure!
What to expect from this story… Faster pacing than my other story… I hope. Trying to stay true to how fun One Piece is to read, while completely destroying the original story line. I hope you like where this story goes because I have a lot of ideas on where I want to take it.
You will get one or more chapters a week, once I have set up a proper backlog of unedited chapters.
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Pretty cool for now. The only problems I have with it is that the training arc is a bit too detailed for my taste and that the mc and the rest are a bit too young.
So far I've only seen chapter 1, the writing isn't bad, honestly I'm hoping for a pretty cool FF and maybe something different from the norm.
Loving each and every chapter. You truly managed to capture the One Piece vibe. The only thing I would like is more chapters
The fic is pretty good so far. The writing is solid, it has frequent updates, the characters are portrayed well and are true to the source material, and it's a One Piece fic so the setting is no issue. There hasn't been much progress with the plot, but there are only 12 chapters at the time I'm writing this so it's to be expected that the story hasn't gone that far yet. I'm excited for it to break canon though, since that's what the synopsis implied.
overall it look good author hope for me just update is a bit unstable otherwise it a decent fic
For only 9 chapters being released out so far & I’m already hooked should say something.🔥hope you don’t drop this
I think this is a step up in writing from my other story. My writing has improved by a good bit and I think the over all quality is just better. That said, there are still flaws and I have a long way to go as a writer. But I hope that who ever reads my story will be happy with it and enjoy it.