/ TV / The Weirwood Wolf ( Game of Thrones )
摘要
What if Robb stark had a twin brother, what if this brother had a near death experience, what if in his final hours the Old Gods save him.
When the Old Gods save Thorin Stark they also bless the whole Stark family.
With a Robb Stark who understands politics and with a twin he can always count on how will the War of the Five Kings turn out.
(When I first began this fic Thorin was meant to be the MC but as it evolved it seems I have made Robb the MC so I’ve changed the Synopsis to make that more clear.)
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I honestly don't know why the "MC" exists...Robb and Jon get every single benefit and are already established characters. Just unimaginative...
The story is not very good, well, I won't say that it's bad, the main character of this story is a gray mouse, if you remove him from this story, there won't be any changes, it seems that the author is a fan of Rob Stark, and that in this story the main character here is Rob Stark, and not the main character of this story, and One and the like are superfluous here, and in my opinion they should not have been introduced into this story.
The plot is quite interesting well, for many the main problem in this story is the main character himself, who is in fact a minor character, I would recommend the author to edit the plot a little to make the main character who he is now just a minor character to remove his sheep and the intervention of the gods and just make him a talented naval general, and make Rob Stark the main character, and just change the plot description to something like, what if Rob Stark had a twin brother? What if Rob Stark was more politically fit? Then this work would have had less criticism, and readers would not have been deluded by the plot because of the description
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Decent but one of those stories where the mc just doesn’t matter to the story
By far the best story I’ve ever read Keep up the good work me