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The watcher is a fanfic novel of fantasy type animation and movie
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Story is a bit fast paced, which sometime make the story feel forced.Every now and then, some sentences missing some word or even worse, the sentence does not make any sense. I think this is due to the author is very immersed in writings the story that some of the plot that the author want to conveys stay in his/her mind and thinking he/she already wrote its. Romance felt unnatural, not sure why tho. Overalls, it is enjoyable if you have nothings to read otherwise wait until the author finished the story and so that reader can enjoy reading it. Suggestions that I want to make is to proof read it after finish writing a chapter.
cant write a good review all i can say is that it is a good one i recommend to read it. 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋
first off the grammar and spelling are both atrocious making it hard to read at all, second what ive read had very little in terms of punctuation. unless the author improves their english skills and rewrites i dont reccommend this
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I just can't stand the grammar, so I failed to give a good review. The story has no respect to include prepositions, and occasionally misses pronouns. I'm not sure, but that's enough to let me leave from chapter one. someone tell me when the grammar is fixed entirely. Don't trust my other evaluations except the writing quality... from a person on chapter 1
Ngl grammar is abysmal but I can understand the concept thinking of rewriting this in better English lol
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I like the concept of the fic the only thing I don't like is what the MC does in each universe that goes
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A great and interesting fic, great job author san 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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As such Fanfic is not known. Author your story is very good, you have everything to rise in the ranking, keep up the great work and all the best.
ok, updating my review, only the * i don't Full put 5 stars, only because of the writing, i read till 70+ until now, and, the full context is lacking, there is no phrase of transition between two paragraphs, and this makes it hard to understand what the author wants to pass, and i really pray to the nexts chapter, see the evolution of the writing of the author....
ok, i m beginning to read this fic, i gonna update the review when past 100+, because I cannot find other review this is not 2-3 years before, till then is 3*
If you can get past the writing in the first 50ish chapters that are worse than a machine translation, then it does improve "a bit." The issue with the story is basically a repetitive play of nerfing someone over and over with gains that don't seem to actually help or improve anything. Not to mention that most rewards will be forgotten in five minutes anyhow. His travels to other worlds are literally just nerfing the protagonist with each jump, so that a poor story can be wrapped around an even poorer developed protagonist. This would be a viable way to write a story if time was put into actually developing relationships or characters. There is literally none of that. Even looking past the nerfing and gains that equal no improvement, the side treks he makes into universes can be skipped with no loss to the minor movement made in the real world. Like honestly.. Usually with this given trope, at the end you're wondering if he can take a character or two along with the protagonist, or worrying about what will happen when they leave and such; but no. there is such little and poor development in his little nerf trips that you don't even care. Oh and did I mention the supposed genius and 'strongest' on earth is basically a blathering idiot and gets somehow almost killed and nerfed at the end of nearly every plot fight? Yeah there is that too.
I wanted to read this, I really did. But the grammar in the beginning is actually the worst. And it apparently doesn't get better.
Sure, the grammar is not the best. But it is not like he is making money and let's be honest. This is webnovel. Anyone really complaining are just annoying. Good story and you get into my library as a good book.