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The grammar in the prologues is generally good, with only a few minor errors, such as missing words and incorrect verb tenses. The world-building in the prologues is intriguing, with the introduction of a supernatural afterlife and the concept of reincarnation into a fantasy world. The characters in the prologues are also interesting, with the protagonist being resurrected by a mysterious, otherworldly being and encountering a half-demon adoptive sister. Overall, the prologues have a strong foundation for a fantasy story with mystery and supernatural elements. This review has been written based on the prologue that I have read. I hope you continue your hard work and I wish you the best of luck.
well and isekai and using a system too, yeah a common story but after read the five chapter i found some a unique writing style how the author using the first person point of view to make the story really easy to read enjoyable
The emotion and flow of the story is illustrated in a wonderful way. Interesting concept. It make me curious how will the MC survive. Waiting for more chapters.
I really loved the story. This novel has become my new favorite. I really loved how deep the author thought about the emotions and concepts in this novel. I wish to see more updates in the future and all the best.
A Captivating story with characters you'd love and others you'd love to hate! It starts with a tragedy and then sprints into the fantasy elements, nice pace, nice descriptions, very entertaining. So far so good! Keep it up author!
I don't really have anything to complain about. The descriptions of what's going on in the story really draw my attention so I don't get lost. There isn't a lot of chapters yet but I am sure this story will be a hit. It has to be a 5/5 from me. I will continue being a ready in the future[img=recommend]
A dark-themed novel where the main protagonist becomes a villain due to the manipulations of a goddess. The transformation of the main character from a good person to a villain was done exceptionally well and added an interesting layer to the story. The main character's loneliness and sadness were also depicted in a way that was both poignant and relatable. Overall, the novel was a captivating read that kept me engaged from start to finish. The themes of loneliness and the consequences of our actions were explored in a way that was thought-provoking and added depth to the story. I would highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys a dark, character-driven story with complex themes. Great job!
This book is so much fun to read. It has engaged me from the first chapter and the characters have their own uniqueness that makes the entire experience all the more fun. What I found most intriguing is that, instead if jumping into reincarnation this story really explores the process of switching from one life to another. Good job author. 👏
i just want to say that I really love this book, Especially the first chapter 😅😅.. it really did caught my attention and somehow managed to completely make me lose myself to this book 😁😁, Lol... like seriously this book is just awesome and I really do appreciate the wonderful author for writing such a masterpiece... please do keep it up author 😘.. Can't wait for the next chapter 😁😁
hello, author here :). this is my first time writing a story to show others, but I am very much passionate in making it an enjoyable reading experience. thank you for taking the time to check my story out!